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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 13:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww that last part was sweet. You added rin and sesshomarou in there which is great! UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 10:23 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... things are going good for kagome... glad that inuyasha & kagome are getting closer... what will happen now... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: inukag4evr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 00:39 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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until now I consider this a very original fic i've never read something like this before, the closest i've gotten was like an egypt AU , just a question what time period do you place the fic cause Sometimes, i would really like to know further what were the reasons for kikyo stabbing inuyasha I 'm looking forward to keep reding this fic its good! ohh just another thing did u post this on adulfanfiction??
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2008 23:44 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Adding a mystery is a great way to keep my attention if the story wasn't good enough to do so, I love mysteries. Your story didn't need the aid but I still appreciate the mystery of Kikyou. I am now looking forward to your updates more than ever. I like how Sango and Kagome are developing a closer friendship and Sango isn't upset about the change. I am curious as to how long it is going to take Inuyasha or Kagome to find out why Sango is perfectly happy not sleeping with Inuyasha any more. I would also like to get some byplay between Miroku and Inuyasha about the girls since Miroku spends some time with the three of them. The relationship of Sango and Kagome with Shiori is also nice. I still think that since you are including her she is going to play an important role at some point to the story, maybe in getting Sango and Miroku together? The other two concubines are funny in their jealousy but I worry that they might try to harm either Kagome or Sango, especially Kagome. Inuyasha will not be happy with them if they try anything. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: ARY2021 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2008 20:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story so far..I have to say I can't wait until what happens next. You have me on the edge of my seat.
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2008 15:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh! Royal intrigue! Were the merchants in league with an enemy to get an assassin in the court? Dalal and Muna seem to be mostly bluster right now but they could turn really dangerous as their position weakens. Great story! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Arelia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2008 14:08 EDT
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Oh wow... crazy drama surfacing! Great update! Please keep them comign quickly!
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2008 13:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo ans the plot thickens... this chapter was wonderful update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2008 10:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another great chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2008 19:39 EDT
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I don't think Sango will mind taking second place but the other two will be out for Kagome if she so quickly becomes the favorite. At least Kagome will have Sango watching her back and when Shiori comes she will help Kagome and Sango against the others. It might be nice if Kagome protects Shiori from something and Shiori uncovers a plot against Kagome. Looking forward to what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 18:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you could have always gone on the net and look some thing up, say some thing about a grey horse (cause most people would always call a horse a white horse) or about the breed, (probably Arabian because of it being a desert (Trakehner, once known as the East Prussian horse, a breed of riding horse. The Trakehner is considered by many to be the ideal competition horse and Europe's best warmblood (a horse displaying the lighter, faster qualities of the Arabian and other desert horses). Akhal-Teké, breed of horse native to the desert oases of Turkmenistan, east of the Caspian Sea and north of Iran. One of the oldest horse breeds, the Akhal-Teké has been bred and raced for at least 3000 years. This horse is prized for its desert hardiness-it has remarkable endurance and resistance to heat. Arabian, also called Arab, one of the oldest horse breeds, native to the Arabian Peninsula. The Arabian was the horse of the Bedouin people (nomadic Arabs) as early as 3000 to 2500 BC. This ancient, pure breed is widely regarded as the definition of beauty and elegance in horses. Acknowledged as the primary ancestor of the Thoroughbred horse, famed for its speed, strength, and endurance, the Arabian has influenced the development of almost all modern horse breeds. An unmatched combination of great stamina, speed, a solid body, intelligence, longevity, and grace are significant traits the Arabian has passed on to other breeds (http : / / www . indianchild . com / horses_horse_breeds_pictures . htm))but I like what you did do, it was another great chapter!
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 16:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a great chapter but how is inuyasha gonna tell sango about kagome bein' #1 update again soon!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 11:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... things seem to going fine for kagome & inuyasha... nice that they spent time together... things are looking good so far... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 19:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor InuYahsa, poor Sango...
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 15:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just can't help feeling badly for Sango. That blank look on her face couldn't have been her contemplating what position she wanted to try out with the prince. Is she really bummed about having to sleep with the prince until he gets tired with her? Does she think about the future at all? I know sango traditionally ends up with Miroku, but is she even allowed to think about other guys like spiritual advisers. Poor Sango! Nice cliffhanger, by the way, about Kikiyo. I wondered when she would come into this story.
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