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Reviewed By: Arelia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 15:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update, yet again! I was actually wondering throughout previous chapters if you were going to throw the Kikyo wrench into the works. I'm guessing she may have been the previous favorite? Who knows! -Other than you... ;p Please update soon! You're doing a great job on this story.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 13:19 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice update. I like the relationship that Sango and Inuyasha seem to have. Though why do I think Sango is pining for Miroku with her wish for something else. If Sango does end up with Miroku it will allow Kagome and her to maintain a friendship after Kagome finishes falling in love with Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 11:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It wa a great chapter update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 08:33 EDT
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*smilingly softly* I'm even more convinced then before that Inuyasha will find himself in a situation like his father's after the explanation of the Tiger Lilly Pavilion. So I'm just wondering about the naming of the pavilions... I can see Inuyasha as having a peter pan complex, and Sesshy is all uptight and formal and the heir to the throne, and I suppose his ears do stick out a little. So does that mean the king has a genie lurking around somewhere? Also I am curious are you planning on explaining why all the servants are so rude... I'm sure there is a reason, like they work for Naraku or something, but at this time it isn't all that apparent.
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 16:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yur story is great so far update soon!!
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 11:16 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol! Dalal and Muna remind me of the evil stepsisters from Cinderella! The insults they threw at each other were HILARIOUS! Anyways...great update! I hope to read more soon :) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 06:37 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that sango is helping kagome adjust in the harem... seems that kagome will have trouble coming from the other two concubines... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Arelia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 01:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice, and very fluffy. You left me wanting more! I didn't hand out those ten's cuz I was feeling generous either, you deseved them all. Can't wait for the next update, so please make it soon. It's an intresting story, but will it have a solid plot, or not?
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 18:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Help your to anything here you want to use." should be "Help yourself to anything here you want to use." GREAT chapter!
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 18:43 EDT
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FABULOUS!!!!! I love this story! when will we meet the other concubines? You could have tons of fun writing those two in! thanks for updating, dont keep us waiting too long!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 14:29 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that inuyasha is treating kagome quite nicely... wonder what else is in store for kagome... interesting that sango is in inuyasha's harem... will sango be paired with miroku though?... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2008 21:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... like it so far... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 19:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a awesome fic. I can't wait to read more.... is Kikyo gonna be in this fic or not? I'm not really a fan of hers, so I really wouldn't mind of she wasn't.
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 02:37 EDT
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mmmm... nicely done. I can't help but wonder though if Inuyasha won't end up in a situation much like his father's. Married to someone he doesn't want to be with for political reasons, Kikyou comes to mind, but all the while loving his concubine Kagome. I would imagine that it will be hard to raise her station now after he has claimed her as his concubine, had she remained an unclaimed odalisque (virgin servant that lives in a harem) then perhaps that would have been easier. I also couldn't help but notice that they never kissed. I'm guessing that this is because like in many other stories kissing shows a level of emotional involvement that they're not supposed to feel as master and concubine? I eagerly await further updates.
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Reviewed By: kagomesdouble07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 22:11 EDT
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its going to be interesting seeing how the miroku and sango relationship is going to form in this story, as well as kagome and inuyasha's
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