| "Glowing Remains of the New Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2008 06:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is a great story so far, however one thing is strange. the kids are supposed to be what around 10 or 12 for the oldest and it's been 28 years so if kagome was 20 when the well closed she's now 48 looking better than she did at 15 and is in shape to hike around fighting demons in the feudal era? even if they found all the shards in the first year when kagome was 15 that would make her 43, i think you need to change kagome's age a bit. of course other than this one thing it's a great story and i would like another chapter before the week is over if you can...or even tomorrow would be best.
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Reviewed By: alesana [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2008 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this, though I'm slightly confused. Maybe it's just bad understanding on my part, it's pretty late at night... :] So is Kagome in her late thirties or something? Or is she still young? Just wondering :]
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