| "Tenshi" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2008 02:40 CDT
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funny chapter- the joys of being bored to death. hope you had fun in Salem and whenever you update you can count on another review. Ja ne! -DuskenDreamer53
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 22:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
THANKS TO YOU I NOW AM REABSESED WITH NARUTO!
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 05:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! The fact that you did your research (or knew this stuff) and accurately used it was impressive and admirable. Not many authors do that and tend to just make up something they think is cute or romantic. Very nice the way this is forming and I'm happy to say EVERYONE is in character so far. On a completely (well maybe not) random note, it would be hilarious if someone else came to like Kagome and it irked Gaara (not that Kagome would be happy with it, I'm sure she had more than enough of that with Kouga and Hojo). This must be the longest review I've ever typed, which is pretty weird since I didn't sleep one bit and I'm hyper as all hell (like you really need to know that..) but I hope to see an update soon- keep up the good work! -DuskenDreamer
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 16:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice Hmmm I wonder can you drawl the shell apple flower. Also I am confused if he is an ex thingy then way dose he still control the sand ?
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Reviewed By: Prinzess_Mika [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 08:38 CDT
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Garra sounds like he's cutely falling in love..aww!!
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Reviewed By: Ariz0na Sky [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 17:27 CDT
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I think it should be a 'bloodline trait' it would be nice if should could harness both energies ^_^ keep up the good work, this is getting interesting!
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Title: My pick
Reviewed By: jammie113 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found your story and I really like it. my vote is for option #2
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Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 19:56 CDT
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Option 2! More interesting that way.
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Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 00:14 CDT
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Wow you've got a lot of her emotions and details. This is a great start! Can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Kai3anime [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2008 17:45 CDT
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I love this story, Kagome's character rocks, and I love everyone's reactions, anyway i can't wait for another chapter.
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