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| "high school life" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: MisfitBride [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2008 15:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's called a chapter, not a "season". Your plot is really good, although, it's hard to read it with all the grammar mistakes and lack of punctuation. You should maybe think of looking for a beta.
| Reviewed By: grammarpolice On: July 04, 2008 09:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Try using real words, not this silly text type you're writing with and some punctuation if actually expect anyone to read your story.
| Reviewed By: bmine4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2008 04:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey alex! its me ashley!! ^^ i just wanna say ure fic is awesome!! im really proud of u that u musterd the courage to put this online! love u!!
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