| "As I Am" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: FIRE Tiger [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2009 12:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this story. please continue. your a good writer and u should continue writing.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 14:11 CDT
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epilogues are always nice (hint hint) ♣ one would thing that they would be frightened to go anywhere alone while naraku is still at large. maybe sesshoumaru will attempt to eliminate naraku as he could be implicated. then again i haven't a clue and my blood sugar is low.♦ it's nice to see them get closer, tentative touches and shy passes. ^.^ ♥ delighted, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 16:36 CDT
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if he's lying or not about sesshoumaru's involvement only matters once they get free and who can really believe a psycho. yasha is almost old enough to be on his own and quite old enough to be emancipated. ♣♣♣ you haven't clarified whether they are youkai (i refuse to use the 'd' word as there is no real english equivalent and dub translators have assumed american audiences were a stupid lot who couldn't comprehend beings called 'youkai', 'hanyou', 'mononoke' and 'oni'... the word 'demon' would in japanese be 'akuma' or 'akki' a being never mentioned in the japanese anime/manga) so i'll just assume they are human until i learn otherwise. ♠♠♠ frightening chapter one hopes that they won't suffer irreversibly and they will be rescued or they will escape. ♦ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2008 00:35 CDT
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a serial killer or just yasha and his mum? how would she be able to protect him, she's dead? does sesshoumaru know of naraku and is he going to try to find them?. . . looks like the 'date' went well, if not a bit awkward. seems like he is always lacking in social skills but down deep he's sweet. . . now for the really angsty horror, huh? i may skip the really bad stuff and wait for things to lighten up. i'll still read what i can. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: inu-babe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 02:54 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an awsome story so far you have to continue
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Title: grr i'm a verry impaten person please upload aother chapter!
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please it's a really good story and i want to read more
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2008 20:22 CDT
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i am a bit confused but in spite of the confusion this is an interesting albeit disconcerting story. . . are they youkai and hanyou in this world? i am thinking that might be why yasha is healed or is he still recuperating? there is another thing though, ginny doesn't do angst and character death so if this doesn't have a positive ending i would appreciate some prior notice because i will have to stop reading (one only sees so much death and suffering first hand without having to read about it or watch it, i'm sorry, i don't watch even the news). . . captivating and well written, it deserves recognition. ~ thank you, ginny
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