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| "Therapy: Naruto style" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: Omoshi no Tenjou
Reviewed By: GoblinKing2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2009 06:56 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yeah, some sentences lack punctuation marks. Other then that, it seems to be good. Though... why Naruto thought the therapist was going to do something pervy is beyond me ::Twitchy McTwitcherton:: And how did the therapist manage to grab Kakashi's Icha Icha? That is an impossibility for even high-ranking shinobi, let alone a mere civilian. Ja ne. PS: I don't speak japanese, but the gist of the title is 'Weight of the Heavens' The Goliath's Commandment - Logic is my Insanity; Insanity is my Logic ~ Hanicas's response to Vulcans; What makes one man cranky makes me ponder the existential significance of Hall & Oates ~ Hanicas's response to Bruce Banner's quip 'Don't make me angry. You wouldn't like me when I'm angry'; ::eye-twitch:: I AM NOT JESUS! ~ Hanicas's response to being in the presence of Christians; I know how you feel. Everyone thinks I am a cannibalistic monster that kills people for no reason. I AM NOT A MONSTER! ~ Hanicas's reply to someone talking about how people assume she is a no-nonsense bounty hunter, all the while he just tore the barkeep's head off and is eating the flesh All that because of Therapy: Naruto Style
| Title: lol
Reviewed By: JeniHugsTrees [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2009 13:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
that's all i can say is lol.
| Title: FUNNY!!!
Reviewed By: StrawberryRiot On: August 12, 2008 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very funny story! I really enjoyed reading it and can't wait for the next chapter!
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