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Title: reply to sessyalltheway
Reviewed By: MyBloodyTears [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2008 14:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Alice is dead. I made it clear when I mentioned that Jasper's mate had been murdered. Thanks for reading...I'll try to update the story as soon as I can. ^^
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Reviewed By: sessyalltheway [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2008 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good so far!!!you need to keep writing!!!!!your really talented!i like that she was different!nobody writes about goths so it was refreshing!!!!(oh and what happened to emily?or whatever her name was???jaspers mate???)
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