| "Scars" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Hiroto [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 10:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
...Wow. This was great. I mean, really...sorry, I'm kinda at a loss for words...-_-;; Your writing technique is great so coupled with something deep like this (even if it didn't seem deep in the original) makes the story stick in your mind and makes you think. Your a great writer, Hiasobi-san. Are you sure your not a actual published author who just comes here for fun? >.
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Reviewed By: Nevermore [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2005 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! You're right the aren't any kenXmisao fics anywere. It was beautifully written. I loved the symbolism in it. Please wright more.
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Title: COOL!
Reviewed By: meepo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 22:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a neat fanfic! I like how you called the blood on his hands scars instead of stains, I've never though about it like that before. But is Omasu a killer? If you're kind of comparing her washing of clothes to his, what with the trying to wash the blood off of one's hands, then does that mean she kills people too or is it just because they're ninjas? I was just wondering... Anyway, that's a good fic. I love the way you write!
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Reviewed By: volpa [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2003 05:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was a tiny bit confused by your use of the thoughts in the square brackets, but I think this is great. You're right; Kenshin and Misao would be interesting. I always thought that Kenshin puts Kaoru on a pedestal too often, and Misao tends to do the same to Aoshi, so it would be fascinating to see a Kenshin/Misao storyline once in a while. And I think your take on Kenshin's compulsive laundering is spot on. Thanks for the entertainment! |
Reviewed By: Faelynn On: October 21, 2002 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I truly enjoyed reading your story. The characters are true and I can see this occuring in an episode. It's quite believable in the world of Kenshin. I think you've captured the tragedy of Kenshin. Hope you don't mind, I've saved a copy to re-read. :) |
