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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2009 14:51 CDT
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i was beginning to wonder if they would ever get to have their date. but after 6 months, i have to admit that it was worth it. i loved the way that everything went down. that 'murphy's law' date that can either make them never want to see each other again, or bring them closer than anything else can. i did feel really bad for inuyasha, though. even hojo's girlfriend asking for his autograph seemed to hurt. great chapter.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2008 04:25 CST
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i appreciate your feelings on this. when it is ready, it will come. a good story is far better to read than one that feels forced. i will look for your new story when it's posted.
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Reviewed By: volleygirl07 On: December 06, 2008 16:10 CST
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I know you're probably busy with your life but...I really want another chapter!!! Please update ASAP!
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Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2008 21:51 CDT
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Eeep! Yaay! Another chapter thank god! I was going insane! Awesome chappy can't wait to read more! =] I wanna know what that whole secret Inuyasha is keeping from everybody but his family!!!! >.< It's so annoying not knowing it just naws at you all NIGHT dammit! Sorry...Lol update soon!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh, went fic hunting and found this lil gem. Sweet! Only a few chaps but I like what Ive read thus far! Update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: volleygirl07 On: September 28, 2008 17:29 CDT
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I love how Inuyasha gets so nervous! You nailed the first date jitters. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 23:55 CDT
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i loved the insecurity and whole 'first date syndrome' in this chapter. reading about both of them going through it was so much fun. i look forward to reading more of the back story to find out why they are both so anxious about dating. i applaud your stand on school. you have your priorities in the right order.
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Reviewed By: Fookie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 20:18 CDT
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ZOMG. Inuyasha. Omg. Just....GAH. I'm starting to think of some ideas of what you have planned about what happened four years ago, but seriously, I really don't a cluuue and it's starting to bug me. xD I love Inuyasha. He was soooo awkwardly shy it was so cute and gahh. It was perfect. I can't wait for the next chapter. I know I'm going to love it even more than how much I love this one :]
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Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2008 13:15 CDT
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FINALLY!!!!!! Yaaay! Inuyasha and Kagome are going to go on a date now! Sweet! =| I mad and happy with Fluffy...how could he say thoes things when he knew Kagome was listening? And even in the beginning! How could he say thoes things! *sigh* And I'm happy now because of what he said to Inuyasha when Kagome was there she agreed to the date! Yaaay! Can't wait for the next chapter! update soon!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2008 09:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool
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Reviewed By: Fookie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2008 11:49 CDT
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No, I don't mind at all. xD It's okay, really. And oh my god. This is such a cute chapter. I'm really glad you made Sesshomaru the trainer instead of Inuyasha. It seems to be working out a lot better. Inuyasha is sweet but a bit rough. He is just so adorable. I love this chapter and I really can't wait for the next chapter. You have some major writing skills. :D
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2008 11:12 CDT
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'physic'-A purging medicine; stimulates evacuation of the bowels. i do believe you meant the word-'physique'. ♣ sweet story. i like the character dynamics. the brothers' sibling/work relationship, very realistic. ♥ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: inuyashaluvskagome909 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2008 02:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!1 that was cute!!!!!!!!!!! poor inuyasha!!!!!!!!!!!!!! he liked her for so long.....heheheheh......i understand why he would be mad at his bro but then again his bro did help him get the date!!!!!!!!!!! hehehehehhe........ohhhhhhhhhhhhh cant wait for the next update its going to be great.........hmmmm.....was kagomes ex-boyfriend kouga???? that would be interesting!!!!!! till next time ja ne!!
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Title: Oh my GOD
Reviewed By: Inukag-mirosan lover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2008 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O MY GOD!! I seriously love this story!! I mean, i have to tell you i would have never thought of this myself and i am jealous!! haha. (not enough to plagerize your story :P) But, i might use some of your ideas as in like funny parts. unless, your totally not okay with that, i just love it!! haha. But, i think your creativity is AMAZING!! It's a really original story. It really is creative, in every posibble way. I think it's really cool how you made everything just connect the way it does. I think this story is incredibly good!!! I can't even describe how much i enjoy reading this!!! :D Can't wait until the next chapter!!! :D
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Reviewed By: volleygirl07 On: August 23, 2008 22:22 CDT
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I love the beginning. I'm so excited for new chapters! I love the gymnastics idea too. You're so creative and your writing style is amazing. Update as soon as you can!
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