| "Take it or Leave it" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: citty On: August 05, 2010 10:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi i realy love your story!!! and of course i hope you´ll update soon a new chapter citty
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Title: I love this
Reviewed By: aqia On: October 05, 2008 08:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Been wanting to drop a review but never made it. :-) I love this. Fav part when Gojyo jumps in to save Sanzo. Ha ha...maybe I do like melodramatic.
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Reviewed By: DarkAngelJudas13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 10:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK I AM WAITING FOR PART 2 OF THIS CHAPPY, DON'T KEEP ME WAITING TO LONG OK *gives evil grin* Loved the chap. had a warm family feel to it when they were all together shooting off the fireworks and just watching them as well. Poor Gojyo I knew he was going to react that way when Sanzo showed him that red flower but it turned out ok when Sanzo pulled him into his arms and just held him.*smiles warmly* And the shower scene was very HOT as well as the sex. (I know I'm a perv. but damn it so WHAT)*grins*
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Reviewed By: DarkAngelJudas13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 08:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everytime they fight it's so damn KAWAII!!!!*grins* But it even more kawaii when they make up.
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Reviewed By: DarkAngelJudas13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 07:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Forgive me I forgot to rate at my last review but it's a 10 so you know even though you gave me a heart attack I still loved the chap. But, all I have to say for this is that you are truly trying to kill me aren't you.*looks pointedly* at least it ended with them saying that they love each other.
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Reviewed By: DarkAngelJudas13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 06:13 CDT
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You had me laughing with their childish acts at first, then you nearly give me and Sanzo a heart-attack when Gojyo went down right in front of him as he was protecting Sanzo. Don't do that to me*grabs chest to feel rapid heart-beat* Poor Sanzo breaking down like he did it just made me want to give him a hug and never let him go. But what was up with Sanzo and the Sutra man that was freaky. Guess I'll find out what happens next when I click to read the next chappy.
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Reviewed By: DarkAngelJudas13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 04:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Gojyo was wrong to joke like that, he shold of none that Sanzo would not have taken it very well. Then Sanzo went off alone into the woods and that BITCH took Sanzo after hurting him then tried to rape Sanzo after druging him.*scowls* No one touches Sanzo but ME and maybe Gojyo.*laughs* Gojyo came for the save (thank god) and they made up, to have a really heart felt moment at the inn and then made tender love to each other.*sighs with a pleased smile* Will, til I read next chap. BYE
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Reviewed By: DarkAngelJudas13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 02:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! You had me laughing so hard during that whole card game. No matter who delt they always ended up having the same amount.*smiles* And the kiss even I was like (you did it now Gojyo) but hey it ended in a stalemate. Oh and the sex was gentle and nicely done, and must not forget very SMEXY.*smiles and blushes* See you after the next chap.
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