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Reviewed By: ClaireAlbright On: July 24, 2009 01:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Story was clear and engaging. Typical excellence I expect from you. Why didnt you continue? Not enough positive reinforcement? Well I hope when you see this, it helps! This has potential to be a great fanfiction. Other Avatar users rave about you on different websites. How else would I have found you? Believe in yourself..Believe in your talent. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Kanna Mizuo Megami On: February 02, 2009 20:23 CST
Comment/Review:
Hahahaha. Very nice. Short but still a very amusing story. I don't really like that Aang is so oblivious to everything but it does fit in well with the story. I haven't yet checked but I do hope you made a sequel to explain this story further. Otherwise my mind is going to go haywire thinking up different stories and scenarios as to how this happened. Keep up the great work! Kanna
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 12:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
now someone has been naughty.*giggles*
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