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| "Unbreakable" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: BlueFoxofWater1569 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2008 09:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Feels a bit rushed, still. Zidane's an idiot, as usual... I don't think I'd like that pairing... Zidane/Rinoa... NO! I wish that was Zack from 7... So which one are you? I'm gonna guess Cody? I'll be waiting for the next UPDATE! ~BlueFox~
| Title: Laughing, but a Little Confused
Reviewed By: BlueFoxofWater1569 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 09:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, obviously I originally didn't see 'Self-Insertion.' *laughs nervously* It took me awhile to get that YOU were in there, despite it being in 1st person (I first thought it was Blank...) But anyway, I found myself laughing A LOT to your innermost thoughts. I love this fic!
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