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"Sasayuri" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 29, 2008 18:22 CDT
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That's beautiful. Did you write the poem too?
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 26, 2008 19:16 CDT
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keeping her at the village probably will have that effect on him as the protective fatherly type feelings change to something else as she matures and develops. ♣ by staying away from her he would feel he was distancing himself but if he were to have kept her close the 'fatherly' feelings would not be fading. i say it's his own fault. good one, subtle. ♥ a delight, ginny

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