| "Blood Stained Hands" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: FIRE Tiger [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2009 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U Need to continue writing its a story that makes you want to know what happens next. keep writing and finish this story.
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Reviewed By: timeslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2009 12:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're summary got me out of minor curiousity but I've just sat here for an hour and read all six chapters in a row! Amazing originality and how my heart is breaking for Naruto! Your desciption of Sasuke's inner thoughts and emotions really makes me 'feel' it. Very well done please update soon. I'll be waiting for more! :)
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2008 19:09 CST
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I really like this story and I would like to read the other version too. The unleashing of the seal was kind of freaky and I feel so bad for Naruto for what he is going through. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: narufreak1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2008 11:58 CST
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Itachi should come back but naruto uses the power he wants aganist him and itachi dies but thats just me
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Reviewed By: naruto_kurosaki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 10:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story i really like it. a very original idea with naruto's body in front of them ppl would be hesitant to deny what they see. they would believe him to be dead. this is a great story i highly enjoy it i have one request please don't ruin the whole thing with yaoi as some ppl have done with their stories. i dont know if u like it or not but it is a story killer. the reson i fear this is due to the closeness of sasuke to naruto its a little too much. i'm glad tht his friends have finally been entered into the picture i hope their presense only increases as the story goes along. thoroughly enjoying the story & each new chapter can't wait for the next one.
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2008 07:05 CST
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can't wait to read more
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2008 19:42 CST
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Hmmm where to start...Well I really like it! I sincerely like your story. I don't believe that I have read anything remotely in the same ball park and I enjoy that. Also, I enjoy your writing style and the attention that you put on Sasuke's thoughts and feelings. In addition it makes sense that the only one that Naruto responds to initially is Sasuke. After spending all that time trying to bring him back Naruto's devotion to the Uchiha would remain ingrained. Nice touch. Furthermore, the 'lunacy' of Naruto while talking about the Kyuubi and the Akatski trying to break Naruto's will was in my opinion very well done. Please keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: wolfteam000 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2008 06:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a well written piece and I liked the way you explored Sasuke's inner turmoil
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Reviewed By: narufreak1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 20:53 CDT
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i really love this story. I swear i started to cry this last chapter. I can not wait for it to get updated if you up date it and i hope that it will be soon. Well must go and read it again ^_^
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 22:40 CDT
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I really like your story so far. Gaara and Sasuke with emotions...like it. I really looking forward to seeing where you are going with this.
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Reviewed By: Uniasus [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 17:40 CDT
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I'm rather curious as to why Naruto was left behind. Due to his whisker marks I assume he is still in possession of the Kyuubi, why did not Atsuki (or however you spell that) take care of that right away?
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