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"Captive Audience" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ]
 Reviewed By: Eluwei [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 12, 2009 00:09 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I may need my inhaler. Much more and I'm going to laugh myself into an asema attak. Goodness I can't even spell right now. That was wonderful!!
 Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 05, 2008 23:43 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Whoa...ya know, I know this was meant to just be slapstick comedy, and don't get me wrong, it was definitely funny, but...it also had a very "real" quality to it. Just a glimpse of a day in their lives. It was definitely canon, and potty humor aside, I could feel Inuyasha's pain. He's just living his life the best he can, mourning his lost love, yet reminding himself that he's no longer alone in the world. It was a serious moment shrouded in humor to mask how serious it otherwise would have been. Nicely done.
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 05, 2008 03:41 CST
Comment/Review:
hilarity and potty humor. our family never shut the bathroom door-- one did not venture up the stairs if those kinds of noises were being produced. and the obligatory matches would have to be lit. ♠ i loved the early 60's cars. daddy had a pepto pink 1957 cadillac eldorado with the big tail fins and the bullet shaped black rubber tipped bumper guards in the front. they did look like something that miroku would love. fun stuff!! --well not so fun for yasha. ♦ in my reality, my favorite fictional characters never die. the tachi are living in some obscure out of the way gated community up the street from the kenshin-gumi (beware the reality challenged). ♥ a dubious pleasure ♥ ginny
 Reviewed By: ardy1  On: November 05, 2008 00:31 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Clever, funny and a bit poignant at the same time. Loved the references to the '60s. Loved the matured personality of Shippou. I'd like to see a *lot* more of that fox demon! ^_^ Inu trapped on the toilet is gross but oddly believable. And it was actually done such that it wasn't even all that offensive. Impressive. Thanks for the pleasure!

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