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| "PS15" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: dreamcaster555 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2009 00:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eh... I don't like the look of my ratings, so you can just ignore them if you want. Haha, why did I even bother? Your fanfic is soooo good, I mean, it's not my favorite thing in the whole world, but I'm certainly enjoying it (and saving the 10s for my favorite chapter)! Don't worry about the lateness, it happens all the time to me! But I would encourage you as a fellow writer to write because you want to, not by the value of how many reviews you get! ;] But moving on the the chapter: IT MADE ME SO SAD. You've really set the stage though for how all the negativity in Sora's life has brought him down. Sure he was a jerk to Kairi in this chapter, but you can't really stay mad at the guy for long -- and I think Kairi has become a little brat. Riku I don't know, but he'll probably side with whatever Kairi has to say... (figures). And so the cycle of angst continues! I assume Organization XIII members will start poking their heads in and flip Sora's world upside down? I look forward to it! Oh, and my guess for pyro-dude would obviously be Axel; pillow-girl is a lot harder, but I'm going to guess Larxene. Well, that's about all I have to say for now. I look forward to your next chapter, specially if Roxas' confrontation is in it! ^^
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Reviewed By: dreamcaster555 On: January 17, 2009 00:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Very nice, very nice! I feel so bad for emo Sora, but hopefully with all the cool people he's got a school they'll find a way to turn things around. :] I look forward to your next chapter!
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