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| "Blatant Stupidity" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: kyriss12 On: July 13, 2011 07:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
found the story to be hilarious. I've seen a few good oc fan fics where well developed character fits neatly into established cannon, then gracfully disapears after playing their part. unfortunately the vast majority are some one inserting an over glorified version of themselves who dominates the entire story with their sheer bad-assedness. that said I've also read a few cross over fan fics that do the same thing. there is a halo/vandred fan fic floating around written by a butt hurt fan boi, who's more concerned with spewing his endless knowledge of the halo universe, and carrying on about what a bad ass master chief is, then writing an entertaining story. but it's late, i'm tired, drunk, and probably ranting again so good story though. really. | Reviewed By: Romanitza On: September 16, 2010 03:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are nothing short of brilliant! The way you write, the descriptions, oh the spelling, grammar and punctuation! Oh, I'm in love! Seriously, though, this story was gold. You wrote a Mary-Sue so scarily close to the serious OCs I've read on this site and others that I got a cold chill down my spine. At last, someone who hates all these Sue centric fics as much as I do. So, thank you so very much for writing something coherent, readable and enjoyable in this cesspool of shit and soul-crush Sue-ism. Thank you!
| Title: Odd...
Reviewed By: Kiara_Kamlyn On: December 29, 2008 03:15 EST
Comment/Review:
How...odd. The main OC I use is named Kiara, and she too, always involves herself with the element of ice. her personality is a lot like the Kiara in your story. I'm not sure if that's cool, or creepy because we think so alike.
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