| "36 Erotic Feudal Tales" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: Always sweet...
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a subject very rarely touched upon, probably because most people are either uncomfortable regarding it, or fear that their readers would be uncomfortable, but I think you handled it beautifully. It was realistic, not overly gross, and in true canon nature, Inuyasha probably didn't even realize how romantic he was being with what he said. Well done.
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2009 19:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Coolio. I Like these short little things... there just so awesome!
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Title: Fortune of the Heart
Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 00:55 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sometimes romance can be erotic. This was a nice sweet piece that showcased the feelings of the characters in a good way. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: sesshys_jaded_samuri [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 20:23 CST
Comment/Review:
Congratulations Roxotaku - your story 36 Erotic Feudal Tales has been nominated for Best Lemon at the Inuyasha FanGuild for the Fourth Quarter of 2008! This is only the first step in the process though-all nominations have to be seconded in order to reach voting. Furthermore, each nominated story must pass a careful screening process in order to make certain that all stories nominated at the IYFG meet our standards for technical quality. In the event that your story is disqualified for technical reasons, the IYFG offers resources to help you make improvements so that you can appeal the disqualification and have the nomination of your story reinstated. These resources include a Grammar Guide (posted on our website) of helpful hints and common mistakes, as well as a newly created Beta Group to assist you in making any changes you wish to make. You are in no way obligated to use these resources, but they're here for anyone who is interested. If you would like to learn more, keep abreast of your story's progress, or perhaps even join the IYFG and participate in our proceedings yourself, visit our website at Inuyashafanguild.com (or search "Inuyasha FanGuild" if you cannot access the link). And feel free to contact a moderator if you have any questions-their contact info is available on the site. Congratulations again! Sesshys_Jaded_Samuri
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2008 11:10 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know I am now very curious what would have happened if she sat him while the kotodama was in its new location. Lovely story and the the lesson story was also hilarious. I am surprised that Sango wasn't more upset about the spying though.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2008 07:22 CST
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my mind could only imagine what would have happened if she'd used 'that word' while the kotodama was in place.
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Reviewed By: lilyyasha On: November 23, 2008 08:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic as always. Can't wait for the rest of the tales!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2008 21:56 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely smutty trio. I love how Kagome has no shame in hitting on Inuyasha outside. Granted it is some distance from the village, but still, they could be discovered but Kagome doesn't care. I love how you show their deeper feelings for each other in the care they take to ensure the other is happy, even when Kagome is ordering Inuyasha how to take her she makes sure that he is happy about it too, and he is willing to do what she wants to give her pleasure. I can't wait to see the other 33 stories.
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