| "Voices" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2008 13:15 CST
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one guesses that yasha won't willingly explain any of his past to her but one will be patient for all to be revealed. one realizes there is more to be resolved than the retrieval or her brother. quite interesting.
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2008 13:23 CST
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ooooh this story is really interesting. You've got me all curious about the consequences of wishes and why Inuyasha is so angry and....well I suppose I'll just have to wait until the next chapter. Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2008 08:53 CST
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one is looking forward to reading more as the story progresses, as details and explanations become clearer. ♣ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2008 08:35 CST
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she should have wished him able to talk, then she could understand him. ♠ so what sorts of perils await on her quest to return her brother? scary stuff ♣ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2008 03:06 CST
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quite a fascinating story! ♣ eloquently written. although i wasn't in 'beta mode' i didn't notice any blaring mistakes, typos, or malapropisms. unless you have already acquired a beta reader it looks like you really don't need one. ♥ i shall look forward to reading more. ♦ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: inu-babe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2008 01:49 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was an awsome story so far and i love the plot so plz put another chappie up a.s.a.p
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