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Title: Great job!
Reviewed By: jmm On: March 30, 2015 01:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG yay finally found a story about goku and bulma! :D So why was
bulma in the woods? And what was Goku doing there with her if he
was supposed to get married? But wow that sex scene between those
two was nice, i wish it had a little more to it though :/ I loved
the ending, how they both remembered their night together awww. I
laughed especially at the part about goku not knowing what an
erection was and how he thought he was "dying" when he climaxed lol
poor little goku XD I also loved how you included the part where
krillen brought up how chichi said she and bulma should swap mates
;) great job, going back to read it again. nice choice of vocab too
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Reviewed By: Lyls On: September 23, 2012 00:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I happen to bump to your story by... I don't know, I can't remember how do I get here but I regret nothing cause this is oh-so-flawless-and-wonderful and it melt my heart. I love it so much. I think this is the first time I read fiction about Bulma and Goku that left this fuzzy feeling inside me. I admire your greatness with words. That's all :) |
Reviewed By: okieday17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2012 09:01 EDT
Comment/Review:
Beautiful. Great job- I agree with you. Bulma and Goku were never a couple, but how could something not have happened between them?? |
Reviewed By: vegeta's_chew_toy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2011 23:07 EST
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Heh, after reading this story I've gotten sucked into the awesomeness that is Goku and Bulma. And you, my dear, are awesome for writing this beautiful story! *fangirl yell* ^_^ |
Reviewed By: jenko sa On: January 19, 2011 02:48 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awee, I came upon this at said DBC fanfic salon and after reading this I'm feeling very happy. You are a really great writer! Definitely faving this. |
Title: awesome
Reviewed By: rosalie On: August 20, 2010 21:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bulma and Goku are my favourite couple so reading this fic was a big pleasure to me ;) you're great and I wish that you could write another story with them! Keep up the good work ;)
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Reviewed By: Chroniclazinesss On: August 12, 2010 23:52 EDT
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This is... amazing. For lack of better word. I mean, more than the delicious sex and more than the perfect characterization and description, this captures something this is so essential and fantastic I can barely even name it. You know it's great.
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2009 19:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am a Vegeta and Bulma fan but I also believe that something probably went on between her and Goku so it is so nice to see good fan fictions written with that possible scenario. Wonderfully written!
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Reviewed By: cyzay [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2009 02:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish I had your style of writing - that was so amazingly beautiful, the imagery, especially leading up to the event its self. I love the flow, and this really was an easily believable story. I've always been of the mind to think that there was that "something" there, particularly for her, but it was, more or less, destined to never be acted upon, and a silent agreement that it's perfect as such - if that makes any sense haha. That bit at the end really ties everything together (even though I hardly remember anything past the actual and final attack that killed Buu). I think that was really the touchstone of the entire thing, it was really satasfying to read and really gives a strong feeling of understanding and something uniquly special, something truly rare that not many people ever truly experience in a friendship. I've actually never read this pairing; I'm not even sure i've really seen it. I probably couldn't read this paring after this lol unless it was this exquisite. Truly, an awesome, awesome job.
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Title: Of Him and Her
Reviewed By: VividReama On: August 16, 2009 06:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful, amazing, and wonderful. Such a creative original piece. I'm normally not for B/GK pairings, but this was truly magnificent. I enjoyed this very much. ^^
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Reviewed By: Little Saiyajin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2009 11:56 EST
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You my dear, are a genius! I am not really much of a Goku fan, but this fic was beautiful. (Tis Little Wolf btw! >_
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Reviewed By: ilex9 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 15:31 EST
Comment/Review:
Good read. You make a very well put together case for this happening, also very enjoyable. There wasn't one place where I had to suspend disbelief.
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Reviewed By: Pixelgoddess (not logged in) On: December 07, 2008 11:16 EST
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You people keep corrupting me - making me read het. :) I liked this - very believable circumstances. And Goku was so innocent and unaware about himself, even while instinctively understanding Bulma. Excellent imagery.
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Tiffy On: November 25, 2008 07:36 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story from start to finish! It was so cute and sensual! I loved it!
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Reviewed By: Kyrene (I didn't log in) On: November 24, 2008 23:46 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If anyone could give me a Goku/Bulma fic, I knew it would be you. They are my guilty pleasure, but I have such an idea in my head for them that I'm incredibly picky. You caught it exactly (and gave me some more). I just love how you put the quotes toward the end, and just the way Bulma was thinking. Goku was absolutely perfect, which I think is part of my problem. I'm picky with Goku. If something like this happened he'd have to be perfect...and he was. And I love the end of it, how they had their little moment. More matured Goku who actually gets it, and Bulma making sure he really does still remember. Ok, I'm rambling. This was just amazing.
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