| "Semi-funny Stuff!!!" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Tenshi of Light [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 02:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
LMFAO. That was awesome! I loved it! I hope you'll update more and maybe do something with Yami. He smirks a lot, but rarely seems to laugh. I'd love to see you write something about ways to make him laugh. That would be SO cool! Anyways, Awesome work! I loved it. Keep it up! ^______________^
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Reviewed By: Tyler Durden2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 10:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
More description needed so the fic makes sense. A plot needed so the fic isn't pointless. Characterisation needed so it feels realistic. You need a dictionary to learn about a little thing that good athours like to call and "Punctuation." I'm so tired of lazy, pointless fan fics like this that I can't be bothered to write any more criticism. Just put a little effort in to it next time. In fact this review is just a copy of the last one I wrote. That's how tired I am of these half-assed fics. To be honest I just feel sorry for you. Honestly, why do you think the word "Comedy" means unreadable, pointless, plotless, time wasting, half assed, mess?
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Title: BWAHAHAHAAHAH
Reviewed By: HotsummerYami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 22:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHA "Can't stop laughing! so funny! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA*Takes a deep breath* Ok, well this is such a hilarious story!!!1 Keppy up the good work!!!! Of course I would feel stupid talking to a person that looks like you! HEHEHEHEHE!! I want to act like Pegasus. "Kaiba-boy!" HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE!!OK i better go before because my laughter is coming back. Ohh he..he..he..UPDATE!!! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!LMAO!!!
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Reviewed By: Sakura22 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2002 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah...weird but very good. I can think of many more ways to make Seto laugh, most having to do with a certain pink bunny we all know of...Ah, I didn't really like that part in Chibi Anzu's stuff (gah, don't kill me!! ahh!). I like the continuation but not the song...believe me, I quit jazz after warming up every day to that song...::shudders:: Die Barbie die!! ::smashes a Barbie doll on the table:: Die die die!!
Oh, yeah. Hehe...if you want to continue this I'd be happy to help. =O) |
Reviewed By: Lady Kaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2002 13:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
LMFAO!!!!!! SO FUNNY!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Setos Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2002 11:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
thats so good and sooo funny!!!! |
Reviewed By: Yami Chibi Anzu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2002 23:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAY!!!!You mention me!!*celebrates*And no,I'm not mad that you used my song!^.~Anyways...Nice fic!Keep up the good work!! |
Reviewed By: setobsessed On: July 14, 2002 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon.....ok?........ i check for your fic everyday.........very cool.........is it just me or is that most of the people in here like kaiba (*sniff*...i want kaiba for myself)/jk. |
Reviewed By: setobsessed On: July 14, 2002 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was hilarious....you should do more......i love to make kaiba laugh(he's so serious...which is why i fell in love with him in the first place) |
Reviewed By: Thundercat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2002 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ohy very funny! it tickled my funny bone |
Reviewed By: Duelist Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2002 18:46 CDT
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ROFL!!!!!! some of that stuff sounds like what me and a few of my friends would pull off! |
Reviewed By: Brockiepoo15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2002 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Daaaanggg!! That brought me to TEARS i was laughing soooo hard!! Keep it up!
-Brockiepoo15 PikaRppr1 =)
p.s. SETO FOREVER AND HIS VOICE ACTOR!!! |
