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"Busted!" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ]
 Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 16, 2009 10:04 CST
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Congratulations Dyquem - your story Busted has been nominated for Best Oneshot at the Inuyasha FanGuild for the Fourth Quarter of 2008! This is only the first step in the process though-all nominations have to be seconded in order to reach voting. Furthermore, each nominated story must pass a careful screening process in order to make certain that all stories nominated at the IYFG meet our standards for technical quality. In the event that your story is disqualified for technical reasons, the IYFG offers resources to help you make improvements so that you can appeal the disqualification and have the nomination of your story reinstated. These resources include a Grammar Guide (posted on our website) of helpful hints and common mistakes, as well as a newly created Beta Group to assist you in making any changes you wish to make. You are in no way obligated to use these resources, but they're here for anyone who is interested. If you would like to learn more, keep abreast of your story's progress, or perhaps even join the IYFG and participate in our proceedings yourself, visit our website at Inuyashafanguild.com (or search "Inuyasha FanGuild" if you cannot access the link). And feel free to contact a moderator if you have any questions-their contact info is available on the site. Congratulations again! CatLover260
 Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 04, 2008 02:45 CST
Comment/Review:
i love it. who knew that you could turn a word such at busted into meaning something totally different. i loved the fourth one. especially when hiei said what did you expect? i can picture him saying that. i never thought about the red and blue make purple. that is unique in this story. i don't think anyone else thought of making kagome and hiei's children's eyes purple. i love it. this was perfect. got any more?
 Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Pretty in Pink [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 03, 2008 17:16 CST
Comment/Review:
This was wonderful and such a creative take on the prompt! I loved Kagome's comparison of Hiei's relationship with Kuwabara with Sesshoumaru's and Inuyasha's. Makes perfect sense and shows Kagome's ability to see past the surface. And I'd never have thought of purple eyes for their children, but it's a really clever idea! =) Thanks for sharing; I thoroughly enjoyed this!
 Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 03, 2008 00:38 CST
Comment/Review:
EEeeeeeee! THAT was perfect! I love it! So, so wonderful. The way you showed the negative side to "busted" and then the positives to it just blew me away. This one is going to linger on my mind for a long time. I just about died laughing over the fourth "busted"--Hiei was so matter-of-fact about it. "What did you expect?" and the fact that he was wearing those "torture devices" for HER was really just so telling about his feelings for her. ^_^ And I loved the positive spin you put on her finding out about Inuyasha's continuing love for Kikyou as a way she had matured emotionally. You're absolutely right: she does make a damn good friend. And the last little bit, with her cooing to the baby boy while Hiei looked all smug as he cuddled the baby girl just melted my heart. I just LOVE those sweet, tender moments. Bravo!! You turned a tiny, little prompt, which was tailor-made for silly, funny drabbles into something much, much more. That takes talent, my friend. Brilliant!! ^_^

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