| "30 Pieces Of A Pack" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2010 14:53 CDT
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lots of discrepancy in that movie --then they justify the attack (dragon strike or something like that) that sesshoumaru uses with tokijin in 'the final act'. ♣ i still think that if they were going to have to have her put it back on him they shouldn't have had him break the thing in the first place. it's like a tease or something, although i guess i can accept your reasoning on it... although wasn't that 'connection' with the locket from the other movie, with kaguya or something. =p --i know, it's japanese humor, like kancho. ♦ great little revisit of your 'pack law'!! ♥
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2010 11:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your 'Kotodama' addition, but I noticed one boo-boo. You said that even after 'half a century' Inuyasha could still confound Miroku. I'm pretty sure you meant 'half a millennium' if they are now five hundred years into the future observing Kagome. Great work, though. I agree with the 'connection' theory of why Kagome put the beads back on him.
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Reviewed By: Phalon (nsi) On: December 03, 2009 18:14 CST
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Yay for pack law! I missed this series. :D Gotta love how Miroku convinced Inuyasha to let him go to medical school.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2009 18:07 CST
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i can imagine how difficult it would be for inuyasha to have to endure the solitary life he lead with everyone around him ... ♣ looks as if miroku was planing on slacking a bit. ♦ congratulations to you!! =D ♥
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Title: ☆☆☆☆☆
Reviewed By: Hollywood1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2009 08:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story it's really good, and it keeps me wanting more! lol The suspense is killing me! But all together I really enjoy this story and will add it to my library^^ I hope you continue with the story ^.^
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Reviewed By: Deathmvp [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2009 08:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great chapter. I like the reason that her home is thier is becouse of her. I wounder what the granpa would say about that.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven (not logged in) On: April 03, 2009 02:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooo their making the shine... hmmm i wonder was that a younge Kagome's grandpa :P or maybe it was someone else..
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Title: heh
Reviewed By: BlueKitten [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2009 10:44 CST
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*hope
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Title: Awww
Reviewed By: BlueKitten [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2009 10:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for writting these! I feel so bad for Inuyasha. =( It's just so..sad. Anyways, hioe you write more =)
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2009 00:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!!!! have you seen The Curious Case of Benjamin Button???? I think it give a good Age perspective thing which Kagome is having lots of trouble with...
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2009 23:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Inuyasha...
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven (not logged in) On: January 04, 2009 22:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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awww i feel soooooooo sorry for Inuyasha T-T WE NEED A HAPPY OR A FUNNY ONE NEXT!! T_T
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2008 11:54 CST
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I don't see inuyasha talking about this to kagome. miroku seems more likely to. You did a good job of emphasizing how it wasn't anything important. To me making it short was like saying this is all that it was, and that's it. I liked it.
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2008 23:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can understand why he did it but one has to wonder if it was really worth it...he must feel like crap now that he has kagome. And I can understand kagomes feelings as well. Kagome had a kikyo complex! god knows how she feels now. She probably would think he would cheat on her. So he would have to earn her trust back.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2008 14:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
he does it to forget... and to not think... great short!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ichigohime [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2008 11:44 CST
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It kinda makes me sad actually... XD Poor Inu!
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2008 22:29 CST
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i'm so glad that you posted this this way. the emotional description of a purely physical release. now if he can just find a way to make a still immature kagome understand. perhaps if an overly emotive human inuyasha tried to explain it to her.
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