|"Davis and Kari in: Jack Frost Returns" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]|
| Reviewed By: AliciaD On: December 28, 2010 23:30 EST|
Style of Writing: 7 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
I read both this and your similar Jack Frost fic from 2006, and I have to say, you have improved very much! The other one had a lot of misspelled words, bad grammar and sentence structure, and the story was just kind of dumb. This story was very cute and interesting, I liked it much better! And your writing style has improved so much! Thank you for this, there's sadly not much Jack Frost fanfiction online anywhere and it was nice to read some! I've always wished he and Elisa had ended up together,
| Reviewed By: blind [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2008 22:27 EST|
Your story, that is.
| Reviewed By: blind [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2008 22:26 EST|
...heh. I'm a man of few words. I like it.