| "Sacrificial Beauty" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: Cinner [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2009 00:01 EST
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*sound of jaw hitting floor* Whoa, good stuff. Crazy, but I like it.
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Title: dirty and dark?
Reviewed By: livelaughlover4ever21 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2009 02:31 EDT
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i love the whole dirty and darkk but try to lighten it up just a bitt. i still love this fic no matter what you do to it :)
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2009 16:07 EDT
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I love this story. I could go on and on about this and that, but it just rocks. The characters are well rounded and I really enjoyed the rewrite. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: mortalshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2009 19:37 EDT
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I enjoyed you're story even more now you've revised it.Keep up the good work.I look forward to the next chapt.and please finish the fic it's so annoying when u start to read a good fic and the author never finishes it.This fic is definitely worth finishing :)
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Title: Updaaaaate!
Reviewed By: Shimio [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2009 19:41 EDT
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I was wondering when you will update next, your story's awsome! I'm going insane waiting for the next chapter! Please please please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Shimio [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2009 21:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel nerdy from rating twice in a row but you did ask for opinions...The chapter was good it ended a little too soon for my likeing but I wouldn't be too concerned about me saying that. Just a little note, I was never realy interested in naruto...until I read this fanfic you've done an exellant job!
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Reviewed By: Shimio [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2009 20:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Since I only just read this, I'm not complaining about the next chapter yet but...please please please hurry up with the next chapter!! I often think that the cause of my insanity and disability to finish my own fanfics comes from waiting for other people to write more chapters in their fanfics. By the way, I LOVE you fanfic! *Fav*
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Reviewed By: livelaughlover4ever21 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2009 17:11 EDT
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updatteee!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Cinner [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2009 16:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story you have going here. I can hardly go several paragraphs wihtout giggling. Your setup is one I wouldn't expect, and haven't seen before. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: SongInTheDistance On: March 11, 2009 11:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really picky about fanfics. For me, they MUST be well-written, with a good premise/plot, a believable pairing, and minimal grammatical mistakes (I'm an English major, what can I say?). Your story fits the bill on all counts. Keep up the good work and keep updating; I'm anxious to see where the story goes.
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Reviewed By: livelaughlover4ever21 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2009 01:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww i like the 3rd ending lol so update plzz :P
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Reviewed By: ashikami On: January 06, 2009 12:28 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's gonna be a great story, I already really like it, love the pairing and your conception ;D Just don't give it up and continue to update, I can't wait to see how their mission's gonna to turn up ^_^ btw U must have got a great mom lol XP
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Reviewed By: livelaughlover4ever21 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2008 02:29 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh wow i love this story continue and yay sex scene are great xD lol
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2008 04:51 EST
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bah ha ha ha ha! did you really get your mom to edit your chapter XD thats hilarious XD im interested to see where this story goes 8D
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Reviewed By: DemanFox [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2008 16:46 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its good i cant wait to read what happens next in ur story, update soon.
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