| "Sublimation" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: InuYashaFangirl09 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2009 22:07 CST
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*weeps* It's.... so.... beautiful! T_T Sad, but beautiful!!! Baka Inuyasha! I swear, he's lucky he somehow crawled his way into our hearts! argh! He is so dense! Heh heh, I loved that Miroku helped save the day. Inuyasha needed that wake-up call. You finished your fic beautifully. *Begins a wish list to santa* 1. The rights to InuYasha 2. A sequal to "Sublimation" ... what? A girl can dream right?
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2009 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo-hoo! An original plot! They are very hard to come by these days, you know. While the whole concept of Kagome being trapped in an illusion isn't necessarily unique, the way YOU pulled it off certainly was. And that whole bit with the shikon shard? I've NEVER seen that one done before...ever. Well done!
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Title: Sublimation
Reviewed By: Deonica On: January 10, 2009 01:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! I had my doubts, but you DID finish this up with one more chapter. And what a finish! I actually teared up when she made her choice. I thought for sure that you were going to have her choose the doctor! (By the way, I LOVE LOVE LOVE Dr. Inuyasha) I loved it. From start to finish, you did an incredible job! It was facinating! Although, there are a few stories out there that venture into this area, not many pull it off with as much intensity, angst and volitle emotion as you do! Then again, you always have a way of tugging at a reader's heart. It shows the capacity of your own enormous heart! I am so glad to hear that you are safe. I was so worried for a time there. About you, and your computer! haha, you first, of course. :D I can't wait to see what you write in the future! Much love to you always, your biggest fan: Dee.
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Title: Sublimation
Reviewed By: Deonica On: January 03, 2009 23:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I FOUND YOU! :) I makes me so happy to see you not only posting a new fic, but putting it on a different site! Looks like you really are starting fresh, huh? I loved this chapter! So tell me, how does one become your beta because its sooo not fair that you and Cat get to have all the fun and leave the rest of us dangling in the wind. I bet she's already read the last chapter too... I hate you both... On another note, I loved this chapter! You're getting better with age! (snickers) Seriously though, this fic is one of your best written and I wish I could find someway to give it the recognition it deserves! I can't wait for your last chapter and I so call dibs on the beta job for the next incredible fic!! All my love, Dee
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Reviewed By: InuYashaFangirl09 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2009 19:57 CST
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YOU'VE UPDATED!!!!!!!!!! *dances happily with glee* Wow, all this psychology stuff really gets to you 0.o I would be so confused as well! Fight it Kagome!!!! Again, really well written! I am anxiously awaiting the third chapter! *sees Naraku smile at her with no hate or malice* AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THE WORLD IS ENDING!!!!!!!!! RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!!!!!!!!!!! *sees Kagome get hit by a bus* ..... Run the other way I meant -_-
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Reviewed By: InuYashaFangirl09 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2008 20:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is extremely well written! I am in such suspense! I need to know what happens to Kagome! Very original story! =) I love it and can't wait to read more! Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: missingmoon On: December 30, 2008 01:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no! Poor Kags! I can't wait to see what you come up with next. Keep up the great work! I love the way you write! UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2008 01:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah...you're not good you're great! This looks like it's going to be a very good story. Just one thing this isn't a tragic story is it? I'll still read it but I have a soft spot when it comes to happy ending...that and the fact that I dont want to waterlog my keyboard with my tears...o_O
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Title: Sublimation
Reviewed By: inu'sgirl On: December 29, 2008 03:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
um...wow. i don't think i've ever seen anything posted on this site with such perfect spacing, spelling, grammar, etc, etc. so welcome and you started with one hell of a good job. i can't wait to see what you have planned for the next part. please update soon. by the way, your disclaimer was pretty good too. you seem to have a great sense of humor. great job!
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