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"A Tale of Two Fathers" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ]
 Title: A Tale of Two Fathers
Reviewed By: clnv [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 05, 2009 03:06 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Well what a surprise to find you here. :) I love the way you write, all the subtle nuances that cause you to stop and think. I loved how you made their entire journey a breif flash in the existence of the afterlife. It makes you realize that your struggles are not as insurmountable as you first thought. It was interesting that both the fathers thought of the wrong child at first. I guess courage can be found in even the most unlikely of places. I always loved the underdogs...there is just something about them that makes you want to stand up and cheer. What a great piece! It always made me sad that both Kagome and Inuyasha's father were never really given much thought in the manga. How wonderful it was to read that they might have been looking down the entire time; that even though the prejudices between the two species, they also found friendship through Inuyasha and Kagome - like so many others had as well. Sorry to ramble, I just enjoyed this story so much! Possible the most of all you've written! Thanks for sharing! It was spectacular!!
 Reviewed By: pewter_wings [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 04, 2009 18:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Very nice to see the two fathers of these two heros. Will there be more? Will we get to see more dialogue or interaction between the two fathers? It is a nice piece, thanks.
 Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 04, 2009 18:05 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
facinating! great work.
 Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 04, 2009 17:11 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow...this is definetely different from anything I've read out there, but I liked it. It had a sort of fable-like quality to it and the ending brought a smile to my face. I've always wondered if our anscestors could really "look down on us" and this took that and really put it into perspective. Its sweet how the fathers got to watch Inu/Kag grow and live till their happy ending, too. I also liked how they were skeptical at first. It was a very cute, interesting read. Hope to read more from you! ~Amber

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