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| "Another Ever After" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] | Reviewed By: Zjen On: August 12, 2009 14:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please I'm begging you!!! Update!! Also I have a challenge for you. It will be difficult but would you be willing to give a little mermaid version a shot?
| Reviewed By: Em On: May 20, 2009 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absoutly love this story and this movie! I can not wait for you to post your next chapter. Even though I know what will happen, I know that with the way you've been writing this that I will be surprised! L-O-V-E this story!
| Reviewed By: Jenny A. On: May 14, 2009 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't see anything wrong with this chapter but your the writer not me but I'm the reader and I say this chapter and all the others are beautiful written. You have made me see another side of ever after and love it more than I already do. The way you write is an inspiration and I thank you from the bottom and all sides of my heart for this story, it really is a lovely story and I'm on pins and needles for the rest of it. Normally I can't sit still for long to read a story but I'm glued to my seat for this one. You've heared this all before but not from me. Keep up the wonderful work.
| Reviewed By: Deonica On: May 07, 2009 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't listen to that other reviewer my beauticious Chandelicious. If she spent less time "skipping through the paragraphs", she'd see that this story is NOT word for word. I know its been awhile since I've seen the movie, but I don't recall the King and the Prince hunting at the end, or that little scene at the river that was in an earlier chapter. Hm... (lol) I think you've got a perfect blend, paying homage to the movie, Inuyasha and your imagination equally. Sorry, I know you don't condone aruging on your behalf, but it angers me when I see ignorance and pointless bashing on a wonderful story. You know you always have a fan in me, and I KNOW I'm not the only one that has said that to you. I loved this chapter and I felt everything that you tried to convey through both Inuyasha and Kagome. I could feel her heart breaking because of what she had to do, and I could feel Inuyasha's outpouring of love and then his confusion. I even felt Rin's hesitation to tell Inuyasha the truth and I love how you portrayed here there: afraid and angry to be the one to have to break his heart. You bring the characters to life, giving us all a dimension of the movie that we could never hope to achieve on our own and I, for one, applaud you. Sorry about this hun, its been one of those days and I just really needed to let it all out. Keep it up, and I do smell a ball in the next chapter! I have a feeling, it will be one of your best chapters yet. :)
| Reviewed By: .Millicent. On: May 07, 2009 02:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've just read the first chapter and I really liked it. You discrib things amazingly and keep it very detailed. I love this story, and the movie is my alll time favorite. Though one thing had me skipping through paragraphs. You've seemed to have the diaologe word for word from the movie. I'd like this story alot more if you were a bit more creative and put your own twist to the story. I feel like I should just watch the movie. I hope your other chapters show more originality. Other then that, very good.
| Title: wow
Reviewed By: Elven_mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2009 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really awsome. Most people when they try to merge two totally different stories fail horribly but you are doing a wonderful job! Ever After is my favourite movie, i have it memorised, and they are all so well written to be just like their original characters. Kudo's to you.
| Reviewed By: Deonica On: February 10, 2009 00:49 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow, I come back from vacation and there are two new chapters to review! I'm so happy you went with the nipple idea! I loved it! You took a simple suggestion and made it into something funny and witty and everything that makes you a terrific author! I can't believe that you are still typing even with your hand like it is. I told you to take it easy. At least it happened at a good time, well, not that its ever a good time to break your hand. But being on vacation must help. haha. I really like this story of yours, my dear. Its a lot of fun and has just enough of your own flavor to make it different from the movie. Yes, I can see the movie in there, but you almost make it come to life with the characters and the little details that are all you. I love your style of writing. It's so easy to immerse yourself. I've never been so thoroughly lost in any fiction as deeply as I am in yours. You truly have a lot of talent, despite what others may say. Don't let the DQ's get your down. You may not be grammatically perfect, but you have the incredible ability to draw a well of intense emotions with just a few lines. That is even more impressive then knowing where to put a comma. Plus, a few typos add character. lol. Anyway, here I am, writing a book of my own. Keep your chin up, and definately keep writing. I would be sad little suzie if you ever decided to retire those fingers! And don't get your feelings hurt when I copy and paste this on your other account. I have SO much reading and reviewing to catch up with! Sometimes, I think vacations aren't worth it!! All my love my beauticious chandelicious! Dee.
| Title: arizonasiren
Reviewed By: arizonasiren [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2009 00:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this movie. You have done a great job merging the two together. Can't wait for more...
| Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2009 14:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm looking forward to more of this. You've based a story in my favorite fandom on one of my favorite movies. I'm interested to see how it plays out. Nice job on the start. It's well-written and I can imagine which step-sister is which as it progresses.
| Reviewed By: GhostReader [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2009 13:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story! It has two of my fav stories, please update soon.
| Reviewed By: Deonica On: January 10, 2009 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Squeals* Yeah! I've been waiting for you to post this forever! Why have you been sitting on it for so long!? You're killing me. Anyway, you're just the little busy bee lately, huh? Nothing for so long and then, all these new fics. But please tell this sad little soul that you plan to finish your other ones... *eyes wide in hopeful gaze* No pressure though. *snickers* Anyway, another strong opening and your improvement has continued to astound me! I love this movie as well (as it is a classic that will never die) and I can't wait to see how you mold it to fit the Inuyasha-verse. Until the next chapter, hun. I impatiently await thee!! Always your fan, (YOUR BIGGEST ONE EVER EVER!!) Dee
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