| "Made New" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Hangin about On: March 02, 2010 10:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I meant spelled. sorry. looks like I can't spell either. lol!
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Reviewed By: hangin about On: March 02, 2010 10:28 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just to let you know, you speed a few words wrong. the cookie you were referring to is spelled Pocky. And cereal not cereale. Just thought I'd let you know. Nice work!
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Reviewed By: ash fire On: February 10, 2010 00:00 CST
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i love this story plz keep writing
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2009 21:37 CST
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the last chapter was interesting... but i cant really tell where youre going with the story, you said sesshoumaru kagome in the summary but it still sounds like an ultimatly inu yasha kagome... that, and you havent updated in a while... if you update, i will read it. and ill always review. dont give up just because you dont have 300 reviews already, only practice can make things perfect, right?
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Reviewed By: Ishellmay [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2009 20:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
only a few things. Hanyou. thats how you spell it. Um the thing is I NEED an update pleeeeeaaaassssse! I'm begging you...
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 20:47 CST
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eh... its good... well written with very few mistakes... i like the way you portray kagome and inu yasha. keeping it fair yet realistic... youre staying true to sesshoumaru, which i dont like honestly, but i can appreciate it... but im just not in the mood for this kind of story right now... so ill put it to my favorites and read it later...
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Reviewed By: Infinite Silence [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2009 01:06 CST
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I Like your story so far, it is well written, although the chapters could be slightly longer. Oh well, it's still good either way. Hope to see more, Infinite Silence
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