| Reviewed By: masamune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2009 06:27 CST|
Style of Writing: 8 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10
Enjoyed the writing, good descriptions. I was probably too harsh considering you did write this before season 2, but I can't help but think "man, this just doesn't seem like either Allelujah or New Lockon..." ... part of the reason I'm not writing any 00 fanfiction until the whole thing's done. if you scaled back the emotions on New Lockon, I'd probably be much more into it. I liked how you did Al though. very glad to see you're writing. was quite surprised to find an author alert from you in my e-mail box.