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| "Forbidden" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: will you write more?
Reviewed By: doodlebee1265 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2009 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it very much and i was waiting to find a fanfic to what happened to hiddan and i love ho w all the characters reminded me of the orginal characters.I just wanted to encourage you to keep writing b/c i would love to hear how it ends.^_^
| Title: Spiel Mit Mir
Reviewed By: GoblinKing2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2009 06:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Tee-hee-hee. Hidan is a giant furry hairball... ::snickers so hard his unibrow twitches at supersonic speeds:: Ok, I just shook my room with that twitch. I am the second person to review on this site, even though I was the first as well. Still like the story. Will laugh at Hidan. Will prokop to ultra cool musicness. ::proceeds to prokop even though there is no music playing:: Ah... Keep up the good work. Ja ne. The Goliath's Commandment - Our name is Goliath, and we are Legion!
| Title: Reise, Reise
Reviewed By: GoblinKing2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 00:16 CST
Comment/Review:
Hmm... the chapters are short. But I can let that pass. Rin and Ren, if I were to go by apearances, would seem to be descended from Sakura and Sasuke, but that is cursery based on apearance only. Kenjiro would more than likely be descended from Hanabi rather than Hinata or Neji. And he deserves to be socked in the face for being an idiot (possibly impaled). Otherwise, the only other I could give a hypotheses for would be Gin being descended from Kakashi, though only because the only other silver haired resident of Konoha was Mizuki (Jiraiya had white hair, so doesn't count; also any children he had were outside of Konoha). I would actually like to see how this story goes. I don't see very many stories where Hidan plays a major role that is not a lemon. Is he going to convert Akarni to Jashinism? A-Ka-R-Ni does not sound japanese. Sounds more like A Carnie, as in "She's a carnie". It could be though. Don't speak the language. Oh well. Keep up the good work. Fangirlism: Enemy of the Libido. Ja ne. The Goliath's Commandment - Let not the Fan Girl live, for they are the abomination of the Emo! PS: I am not calling you a fangirl. The Goliath's Commandment is apart of my reviews on MediaMinor.org and FanFiction.net
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