| "Sweet Revenge" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: keep it up.
Reviewed By: Snaky [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2009 06:13 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story,Ryou being a girl actually makes sence also Bakura making her hid it(Imagine Bakura in a girls body more creapy than evil) Carla's a psycho,she makes Marik and Bakura look normal, but thats the point I supose Kaiba/Ryou will work with Ryou being a girl as long as Carla doesn't interfere. Sorry if it's a bad reveiw,I'm not that good at storys or fics though I have a soft spot for Ryou and Bakura.
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2009 03:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting that Mai would know already. I figured she would have a strong woman's intuition. I wonder if Carla is going to piece together the puzzle and possibly blackmail Kaiba... considering his obvious feelings for Ryou. Well, obvious to us readers, that is. ^^;;; I enjoy this coupling (SetoxRyou) a lot, whether Ryou is male or female. I can't wait to read what happens next! Happy writings! ~Your newly developed fan, Tori-chan P.S. If you like angst, I have a lot of Ryou-based works that you might want to check out.
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Title: this-not-joy
Reviewed By: dr-fan/mai-lover On: May 15, 2009 08:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yah-this-not-joy-i-know-of-beides-joy-being-isis&kiba&vorion-they-a inybody come-joy-llove-mai&serenity
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2009 20:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
What an interesting story! I'm a huge Ryou fan (if you couldn't tell by the name ^^;;; ) and I love the way you portray him/her in this story. I'm actually working on my own "Ryou as a girl" fic at the moment. Why does it seem so easy to write him that way? :D Your descriptions were great and the plot line is intriguing. I can't wait to read more! Happy writings! ~Tori-chan
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