| "VanDread: Curiosity's Reward" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: Curiousity's Reward
Reviewed By: pak40l46 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2010 04:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story. This is bookmarked on my favorites on my computer. I can't wait to see Misty get some. Then also Duelo and Parfait fall in love also. Please continue the great storyline when you get back to writing. Thank You, Chris
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Reviewed By: un named On: May 09, 2010 02:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Lets not for get about Misty and Hibiki
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2010 13:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Which do you readers want? I think having Duero and Bart having multiple partners would be kinda cool. Since Bart seems to be the most aggressive I can see him trying to one-up Hibiki by trying to build his own harem which BC can either squelch or encourage. It could be kinda funny either way. For Duero I could seem him approaching his patients about this new 'experimental' procedure he'd like to try. And I can also see Dita deciding that *all* the girls on the ship should experience being with Hibiki much to the other girls' chagrin. Either way man I'm just glad you're writing this one again.
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Reviewed By: 31bravo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2010 15:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Good story so far and can't wait for updates! :)
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2009 06:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another awesome and hot chapter can't wait for the big one.
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Title: And...and...and...and...
Reviewed By: Vassago-Toxicity [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2009 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Stop using and so much. Gets annoying after a while. Half the time you use and you could have just as easily replaced it with something else, like a period, a comma, things like that. That's really the only complaint I have. This is a good story, and it has some plot (a lot more than most smut stories) which makes it all the better. Anyway, keep it up.
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Title: Lucky Hibiki
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2009 07:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn that Hibiki he has to be the luckiest son of a bitch in the whole world having sex with two hot babes like Jura and Barnette update soon.
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Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2009 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey another great Vandread story keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2009 01:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked how you've handled this story so far. Though it's only 2 chapters long, you've done a good job with character development and giving us a good background on the story up to now without it feeling like a data dump. It's been so long since I've seen Vandread but I didn't need a refresher. Great stuff, loved to see more.
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