| Title: Not bad...|
Reviewed By: Vassago-Toxicity [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2009 12:39 CDT
Style of Writing: 8 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Not the best I've read, but definitely nowhere near the worst. The only big problem is that occasionally you use the wrong (past, present, future, etc.) tense. That's barely noticeable though and easily over-looked, especially if English is a second language, or if you are learning or have learned a second language with English being your first (I have to go over what I write about 3 times before I'm relatively sure I didn't write it with Spanish grammar). I really like the style you've developed for Ranma so far. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more!