| Reviewed By: Mrs. Kira On: March 26, 2009 15:05 CDT|
Overall Rating: 6 of 10Comment/Review:
i could tell this was your first story. while the plot is exelent, what steers people off is your bad and lack of punctuation. but im not flameing you, seeing this is easily corrected. Spell Check also does grammar, and if all else fails, ask someone to read it over. please keep this in mind and i hope you continue this story!