| "Free My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 143 ] |
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Reviewed By: pisq On: April 02, 2009 17:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was absolutely fantastic! Vegeta's struggle is almost palpable. It's always been about love and hate with them! Do I sense a super saiyan coming up?
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Title: ouch
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2009 16:15 EDT
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Wow so powerful. i'm so happy with this story, you have no idea!!! More more more!!!
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2009 15:47 EDT
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Poor Bulma. I love how you're developing their characters this time around. (Though I'm honestly getting more and more creeped out by Zarbon and Jeice each time XD) The developing tension is great, as always. I can't wait 'til next time.
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Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2009 15:32 EDT
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Wow wonderful chapter. Really putting depth into the story. I can't help but love this!
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Reviewed By: Roar On: April 02, 2009 14:43 EDT
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Uuuhhh.... what might happen next time...??? update soon! :D
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Reviewed By: sihnya On: April 01, 2009 13:09 EDT
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I like your kind of stories, you always keep good characterization... looking forward to an update !
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Title: More!!!
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2009 20:21 EDT
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I like the way they are with each other! I truly can;t wait to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2009 18:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So glad Bulma has become a little less frighten and is able to socialize with Vegeta more. Update soon! Love the chapter!
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Reviewed By: Evil-Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2009 10:40 EDT
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yep. Liked it...nope loved it ;) Way to go girl!! jeeej!
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Reviewed By: pisq On: March 30, 2009 08:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"I assure you, I am no ordinary man," This is just pure gold!!! I like Vegeta talking. Let the man say anything he wants!! lol!
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Reviewed By: silver unicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2009 14:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for this new Bulma and Vegeta story. this is my first time reviewing but I have been a fan of your stories for a while now. I think that you have the best stories about bulma and vegeta out there. And i love this story can't wait for more. Thank you!
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2009 14:27 EDT
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Your version of Vegeta is quite different from your other versions, but I think that's fine. It wouldn't be worth reading if he was the same each time. I love how you showing Vegeta's appeal towards Bulma. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Kinky Typo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2009 14:36 EDT
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Wonderful! Each chapter throws us deeper and deeper into fascination. Oh how I'd love to make some fanart to this story!
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2009 07:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad you updated so quickly. You have the amazing ability to actuality portray Bulma and Vegetas characters so well I am glad you decided to write another DBZ fanfiction. Cannot wait so see what happens next. ^__^
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Reviewed By: FW On: March 25, 2009 04:03 EDT
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I just realized I used the word "you're" instead of "your"...sorry about that.
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