| "VanDread - Halo The Second Stage" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Wow...just wow..
Reviewed By: Reishin8amara On: April 23, 2010 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh,i must say its been a while since i reviewed on mediaminer(im mostly a fanfiction.net guy except when it comes to your fanfics!) I love how you did every bit of this so far and also have to say,you are becoming my idol all over again! Justice League Unlimited Batman Beyond Metal Gear Gundam Seed You have such great in-depth knowledge of these! Heck,some things i wish to see though... Code Geass/Vandread (CC would be one of the peksis i guess) So many ways to twist this one up really! And i can only imagine what Kallens decendant looks like.x.x; can anyone say Dita/Meia fusion...heh heh with a lil cleavage as well...(lets face it..with kallen's genes thats a must!) Also one that NOBODY has done set in the Code Geass universe... Code Geass/Darker Than Black This is promising because both are major series.
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Title: wow....
Reviewed By: Shin_Akamichi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2010 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im glad you finally updated after so long but...wow...um...they didnt JUST 'do the deed'...they did the honky tonk WAYYYY back in the texas.x.x; that was a LONG LOOOONG amount of sex.lol ....if hibiki pairs with more than dita,meia,and jura then oh dear jesus i hope he can live through it!
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Reviewed By: inuboy86 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2010 19:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Another great chapter, though I'm really hoping you will make a Robotech story sometime in the near future, please tell me you will, and keep up the awesome work.
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Reviewed By: LordofTeh Dance On: June 09, 2009 10:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, as usual, but you seem to have made ALOT of run on sentances which are a huge throw off. DO NOT BE AFRAID TO USE PERIODS! They are not the enemy. If a sentance does not seem right to just start from fresh, add a few words.
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Reviewed By: Godzilla2 On: April 30, 2009 14:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am realy happy that you have continued this story. You have thrown some realy good elements into this story and I am realy exited to see were it goes.!
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