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 Reviewed By: Lady Hiroko [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 07, 2009 22:56 CDT
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Umm....yeah. I'm sure this is a good story and has a wonderful plot but you SERIOUSLY need a beta. You have many errors. Spacing issues, grammer issues, and other things. I'm not trying to flame. I'm just saying that you should take the time to look over things and if you have a grammer/spell check, use it before you upload it. I could barely read the first chapter and understand what was going on due to the errors.

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