| "Beneath the Surface" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2002 22:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ohh!!!! Awsome job on this! Your writing style is superb and the story line itself is oh so original. I'm so happy I'm getting to read this ^_^ Keep writing PLEASE.
Storm
storm_410@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: dbz obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2002 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have just read all 9 chapters & enjoyed it very much. It very original. Can't wait to find out what happens to Brolli's youngest daugher and what the Z-fighters will do if she has been taken before they get there. I will be watching for updates. |
Reviewed By: Alexander [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2002 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job! It's getting harder and harder to find decent DBZ FanFiction these days. VERY good job with characterization, like the other guy who reviewed said. You make Trunks and Vegeta sound like Trunks and Vegeta, make their problems seem more like a real family's problems instead of some untouchable anime. Keep up the good work! If you have a mailing list, put me on it. My e-mail address is Saiyajin_Alexander@hotmail.com |
Reviewed By: Anon On: July 28, 2002 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting, adding Brolli into the mix, quite original, somewhat long but long fics are good. You go into depth pretty good, pretty good characterization, I'm interested in seeing what happens next. |
