| "Desperation" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2010 20:00 CST
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A good chapter, though it posses more questions than answers. I really like the story...but really liked the part back in Japan, would have liked more of Inu & Sess working together with the rest of their pack in modern times. Other than that looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2010 00:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... looks like everyone is trying to help shadara... seems that kagome, inuyasha and their group are caught up in shadara's fight... is there a reason or purpose kagome, inuyasha and their group are there?... weren't they supposed to be just visiting kagome's friend?... hope kagome has more moments in the upcoming chapters... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Kags521 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2009 23:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your story and your doin one hell of a good job. I only started getting a little confused with Kagomes american friend and the rest of the pack...it juss got me confused.. But I'm ganna read it over like 3 more times then maybe I get it....update soon!
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Reviewed By: Novemberkid [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2009 12:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story, but i think kagome is starting to fall out of it. The story is all about Shadara. there is no room for kagome in it, so she is pushed aside. it´s inuyasha and Shadara all the time so you almoste think that they are going to be together instead. my question is, where is Kagomes part in this story? i mena, there was almoste a whole chapter that kagomes name was not even mentioned. I want inuyasha and kagome. not Inuyasha and Shadara. but overall, the story is veary well written. i really like it. :) i just want little more kagome in it. that would be great! :D
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Reviewed By: decemberangel16 On: October 21, 2009 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story!!! i can't wait to read more! plz update soon!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2009 12:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... nice that kagome and inuyasha are spending some quality time together - very sweet... seems that things were just fine but they all were alarmed in the end... hope they get to shadara in time... looks like sesshoumaru & rin will be there also if inuyasha wants to talk to their father again about shadara... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you! take care!
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2009 22:41 CDT
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I am sorry for your loss. It is very hard to lose a family member (or one who feels like family). I hope that you and your husband can work through the grief. I wanted to let you know that I have enjoyed your story and will not be able to stop reading it. It is beautifully written and the depths of the characters is truly amazing. It has made me laugh and cry. I feel as if I am reading about family instead of reading a story. I will continue to enjoy your story to the very end.
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Reviewed By: braindrain806 On: September 14, 2009 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'M just a stranger to u, and my words may not help you in any way, but for what their worth, may god bless you, your family, and friends though this difficult time. You'll be in my prayers.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2009 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that inuyasha and shadara have come to an agreement - nice... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2009 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that inuyasha and kagome did good with shadara... she is much better now... looks like the battle has begun also... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2009 11:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked that you were throwing some Cherokee out there, that was a nice touch. I only know a couple of words in Cherokee, so I'm afraid I can't help you with your sentence structure, but I do happen to know that the word for "wolf" is "waya"...thought that might come in handy. At any rate, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2009 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice one... lots of action and drama... good that inuyasha & kagome were able to help shadara... will they remember what inuyasha's father said to them before he vanished?... looks like sesshoumaru and rin will need to be around with kagome & inuyasha to talk to him again... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2009 07:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... like it so far... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Title: OMFG!!!!
Reviewed By: peppaminty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2009 10:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
[chanting rythmically] i wanna see the fight, update now. i wanna see the fight, update now.i wanna see the fight, update now.i wanna see the fight, update now.i wanna see the fight, update now.i wanna see the fight, update now.i wanna see the fight, update now.i wanna see the fight, update now.i wanna see the fight, update now.i wanna see the fight, update now.i wanna see the fight, update now. oh, and sorry about the 9 rating on the overall rating, i would have put 9.9 if it was possible... the momma, poppa, sister, brother, auntie thingamajig was really starting to get to me...[i scare easily.]
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Reviewed By: Darkil [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2009 03:51 CDT
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this is really starting to get good, whenever I get an email saying ur story updated I do an inward dance of joy, and then laugh because I'm not a good mental dancer...
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