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"Love Handouts" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ]
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 04, 2012 21:18 EDT
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YAY! for happy endings \o/
 Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 10, 2010 00:39 EDT
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Awesome story! Love the ending, and how you showed both sides. I really enjoyed this.
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 09, 2010 09:08 EDT
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*falls!over* AWWW! ♥ --that kiss was really special, a wonderful feeling! simple and sweet =) ♥
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 28, 2010 11:25 EDT
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like a square peg in a round hole... ? actions speak louder than words-- physical closeness in japan is only for people who are intimately associated and very rarely if ever in public --but kagome is always leaning on inuyasha, he carries her, she shows spontaneous affection in times of stress, he risks his life for her safety-- surely she sees beyond to notice how vulnerable he is. with him even attempting to explain to her, she should see the effort and the emotional risk he's taking to expose himself in such a way. ټ
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 21, 2010 22:30 EDT
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typical -open mouth, insert foot- syndrome. maybe this time he's said the right words... ♣ they really (like every other anime character) are suffering from that lack of communication. him because he doesn't know how and her because she expects him to know how. like i said in my last review 'poor poor stupid people' ♥ really great job with the emotional insights! ♥;
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 14, 2010 16:16 EST
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i understand the cultural differences in the attitude and opinion of western as opposed to the japanese about the subjugation/punishment. he doesn't act like it's all that big a deal. he curses at her when he goes down and then he's just fine (except when he's under a boulder when it happens, or she says it repeatedly), there's also the fact that she doesn't get all that freaked when he runs at the mouth. men in japan are not gentlemen, there is no chivalry-- and he treats her typically for a japanese man. i understand the reasoning and her feelings about his attitude and his not wanting to be touched after she said that-- although if you had used 'osuwari' instead of sit, she would have never made the mistake because 'osuwari' is a dog's command and not what you would say when telling a person to 'sit'. ♣ poor poor stupid people. ♥ CONGRATULATIONS!! ♥
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 18, 2009 02:24 EDT
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she just effin' planted him while he was in pain-- why would she get all pi$$y over him making a rude remark about her hurting him. goodness-- she's got some nerve acting like that... ♦ i hope you've been watching 'the final act'-- they've reshuffled the events in manga but it's pretty good! since i only watch subs, the english voice actors aren't butchering the pronunciation of all the names-- too bad they still insist on the translation errors they started with in the first one. if you hadn't seen it ~@~ http://shonensunday.com/anime/index.php?ep=167 ♥
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 25, 2009 23:18 EDT
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ah, movies aren't in the original manga canon but i really loved that scene. ♣ she does scream she loved him right before he broke in and saved her from kagura and akago -the evil heart baby. there was no way he couldn't have heard her with his hearing- he was right outside and she yelled it. -she implied he was good enough when she was naked in the sake in toukajin's kitchen, he was giving her his suikan, mentioned reluctantly that it might feel strange as it was soaked in blood-- she said it wouldn't because it was his. --she really had him confused at the end of that episode. -- ♥
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 14, 2009 01:50 EDT
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one would think that he envies the ease at which kagome and shippo can express their emotions for eachother-- and if she could love a full youkai child would she have been able to love an orphan hanyou child had it been him instead. at least, that was what i was thinking. also wishing he could be as open with her-- i don't know- i'm just rambling and my head isn't fully attached yet-- need more coffee! ♥
 Reviewed By: Eluwei [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 04, 2009 21:46 EDT
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It's good, I'm looking forward to more. I would write more but I'm bloody tired. Good work.
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 04, 2009 13:13 EDT
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THIS is where there is a failure to communicate. when there are reasons and motivations for doing things-- nobody has the ability to read minds (except for certain naraku spawned abominations), and one feels that laying all one's cards on the table eliminates misunderstandings and opens the way for dialog and discussion... then again, we're talking about an immature and hormonal teenage girl and an emotionally scarred victim of years of intolerance and abuse-- dialog isn't going to happen unless one of them grows up a little emotionally. ♥;
 Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Mayu 28  On: September 03, 2009 18:44 EDT
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Wow this is deep! I love it!!!
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 27, 2009 22:13 EDT
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one thinks she's a bit hormonal. i understand the worry about the fact that kikyou had tried to kill him (and her) before but she hadn't done it since? -trying to think when this is in the story- glad she got it all out and she'll be calm and in better spirits. ♥ tudou.com/programs/view/QfKaSjBtdLc/ ~chinese youtube~a little animated short from the manga starting here: onemanga.com/Inuyasha/500/01/
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 23, 2009 08:29 EDT
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'inu'-- sounds like a nickname for a bellybutton >=\ i prefer the much more masculine and less bellybutton sounding: 'yasha'. ♣ one would think that if she's the one he stays with, returns to, protects with his life... ♦ yeah, i was sheltered when i was sixteen and wasn't allowed to date (dating was something we were taught was done to choose a marriage mate- we went out in chaperoned groups where pairing off was not tolerated), so i had crushes but never had time to dwell on them because we'd be off doing something else with a different group. ♣ i can see her insecurities in this and in the english dubbed anime- but in the manga and in the original japanese language anime- the whole so-called 'love triangle' isn't emphasized, not that there isn't tension it was more geared toward her fear of his belief that he should die with kikyou than the whole 'who's he love more'. ♠ -i hate the dubs! they mispronounce the names, they use the 'd' word instead of the non-translatable 'youkai, mononoke and oni' ('demon' in japanese is 'akuma'- a word never mentioned in the japanese manga or anime), and they pontificate the whole 'love triangle' thing. ♥ sorry-- *steps down from soapbox* you portrayed her emotions extremely realistically! ♣ delighted, ginny ♥
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 16, 2009 12:40 EDT
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she should realize that if even his own brother had abused him- everyone who she witnessed reject him- thing that he must have gone through his whole life... then again he wouldn't want her pity, and any attempt to be condescending would be soundly rejected. ♣ a narrow ledge, strewn with eggshells ♥ gin
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 16, 2009 11:39 EDT
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maybe kouga has feelings for kagome but it seems like he shows up because it amuses him to aggravate inuyasha too. ♥
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 12, 2009 16:42 EDT
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that was &diams ; -without the space ♦ --HTML codes! -gotta love them.
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 12, 2009 16:41 EDT
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i keep forgetting what i'm reading-- boy was i confused. it isn't your fault i had the manga ending in mind and i keep forgetting that this fic still has them on the road. and then when my mind is stuck in context to 'after the manga'-- my brain just fell out. -&daims;- onemanga.com/inuyasha/ -♦- an oldie revisited: youtube.com/watch?v=bmKhEGiNshA -because i'm listening to it right now on my playlist. *\o/*dancing*\o/* one thinks she is too sensitive, is she PMSing? ♣ i'm not confused anymore-- good stuff! ~pleasure, ginny ♥
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 11, 2009 17:12 EDT
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oh i wasn't meaning jealousy like he felt with kouga-- more like an envy- the ease that shippo can express his affection freely, maybe wishing that he could open up so easily. probably a little wishing he could be hugged and snuggled by kagome too, and then realizing his emotionality and how he would perceive it as vulnerability- dismisses it with disgust. ♣ poor guy, why doesn't he get a 'go between' and then he wouldn't have to go through the trauma of exposing his vulnerability-- the custom is still widely practiced in japan so it would be a viable alternative, i'm wondering if his brother could set it up, i'm sure kaede could set it up or even act as a go between. ♠ and i was curious about what miroku was going to say. ♦ delighted, ginny ♥
 Reviewed By: nicluv1787 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 11, 2009 10:37 EDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Another great chapter Shippo is so adorable and I love it when people beat on Miroku 'cause most the time its deserved. can't wait to see what evil things you have in store.
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 11, 2009 01:14 EDT
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either he is jealous of shippo, or he's jealous of shippo. maybe she should start giving everyone hugs when she wakes up so nobody feels left out... ♣ how can someone who's never had friends before know for sure that he has friends- no wonder he's confused. i'm thinking of a really old disney movie called 'dog of flanders' where a boy and his grandfather save a half dead, abused dog. the dog was angry and aggressive at first, but with patience and kindness they were able to slowly gain its trust- learned friendship. youtube.com/watch?v=2f_3kVwIGGk -♦- delighted, ginny ♥
 Reviewed By: nicluv1787 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 10, 2009 13:35 EDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Great Start cant wait to see where you take this story I love continuations just because Inuyasha leaves so much to be desired in the way of romance. Keep up the good work i'll be watching out fo the next chapter.
 Reviewed By: Kagome_rocks  On: July 10, 2009 10:20 EDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I love it update soon
 Reviewed By: arizonasiren [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 09, 2009 15:01 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Good story. It is nice that Inuyasha can actually see the differences between Kagome and Kikyo for himself. Can't wait to see where you take this story. Looking forward to next update.
 Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 09, 2009 08:07 EDT
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nice! i don't think i read this one yet. one would wonder-- kagome would make him feel completely different than kikyou made him feel. i'm sure that kikyou with her quiet dignity and tolerance for his youkai half, her grudging devotion to duty, her education, etc. would have made him feel completely different- possibly a subdued love with the underlying bias and mistrust. kagome with her fiery kinetic personality, her open acceptance and warmth, her affectionate nature (if you notice in manga that she's always leaning on him, grabbing his hand... touch is very important), would incite his passion and prod of his emotions. ♣ this is a great story and there are too few reviews! ♠ a pleasure, ginny ♥

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