| "The Fragrance of the Perfect Lie" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Shado On: July 24, 2011 04:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story. I loved it except killing off edward's father. I always hated Jane and the volturi glad they got what they deserve |
Reviewed By: gwineveve301 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2009 14:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its a good read, hard to find a decent twilight fanfiction
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Title: best story ever!
Reviewed By: VenomInMyBlood On: July 11, 2009 03:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg please update soon! Your story is so good, and I love how you brought everything together. I felt Bella's pain during the whole story, I would be losing my mind if I was her. I write twilight stories too but only on fanfiction.net. You should check them out. My author name is venominmyblood. Maybe you can be my beta and I can be yours. Leave me a reply if you look at my stories. Adios. Lol
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Reviewed By: krystal09 On: July 08, 2009 01:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and the way you have it all playing out;) it's already saved to my favorites. Can't wait for an update!
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Title: Very interresting
Reviewed By: Alberiogurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2009 02:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very neat. My only concern is that since you labled this a 'continuation', that your writing style doesnt quite match Stephenie Meyers. But other than that, this is a great start to what will hopefully be an amazing fanfic. There's been times when I wondered if something that's been prominent in my life turned out to be a dream, what would I do? Seeing Bella, the last person who this would happen to, as the center of this drastic change, is a great way to explore that concept pf reality and dreams. I look forward to reading more.
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