|"Can I Have Some Revenge Please?" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]|
| Reviewed By: Anon. On: December 14, 2009 22:02 CST|
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10Comment/Review:
Overall Rating: 4 of 10
What may have been an interesting story was seriously hampered by severe technical flaws. Nearly every line had multiple mistakes in the form of misplaced commas, missing dialog marks, or other forms of missing punctuation. Please, check over your writing before posting it.
| Reviewed By: SheikahGirl13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2009 15:42 CDT|
Style of Writing: 7 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
This is one of the most original Ranma fanfic I've read. Also the funniest.