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"Untitled: A Leah Clearwater Story" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ]
 Reviewed By: meg_bre  On: February 06, 2011 18:06 EST
Comment/Review:
wow love ur story so far it amazing so much better then the actual twilight seriously hope update more plz love it
 Title: good job
Reviewed By: lucy sahara  On: January 26, 2011 15:46 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
good job!!! I love this story, keep it up!!!!
 Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 12, 2010 00:12 EDT
Comment/Review:
as for the first time it is good, very good. up date soon
 Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 24, 2009 23:08 EDT
Comment/Review:
I'm going to be brutally honest here. Your writing needs some work. You constantly switch back and forth between tenses. Your dialogue is not realistic. Real people use contractions when they speak, remember that. It would probably help you a lot to get a beta reader. Someone who can go through your finished chapter and edit it for you. I'm not trying to be overly harsh, I just know that if someone had left me a comment like this, my first couple fics wouldn't have sucked so much. I do like the story though, so I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)
 Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: TennisManager09  On: August 11, 2009 11:30 EDT
Comment/Review:
Finally! :) I really like chapter 6. The story is definitely developing more. And I love it.
 Reviewed By: TennisManager09  On: August 04, 2009 12:19 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this fic. I'm kind of surprised that it's your first; it's amazing. Please update soon. I'm begging you. :)
 Reviewed By: gwineveve301 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 28, 2009 22:55 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
For a first time fanfic you're doing great. I love the plot so far

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