| "Save Two Lives With One Doctor" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: quicksilver1142 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2009 13:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great work. By the way in chapter 1 you said Inu turns human on full moon. There were other small mistakes but it is still great. Keep up the great work. I think you should stress out the hanyou a bit by having Kikyo visit.
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2009 11:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please update soon! I love this story!
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Reviewed By: decemberangel16 On: August 29, 2009 16:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story. keep up the great work. pls update soon.
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2009 18:04 CDT
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I REALLY REALLY LIKE IT!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Shikon baby JK [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2009 00:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story it had me thinking that this was a street thing, but now i don't know. YOu don't be little people in the story you give everyone who needs the light. Shine.I hope you up date soon. Over all keep up the great work. Its very becoming.
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2009 00:49 CDT
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Yes, I noticed the same mistake with Bankotsu's name being changed to "I" in chapter 5. What on Earth can cause such an error? That's not a normal typo, if it's changing around on you. How are you uploading your stories? But anyway, since that was a computer glitch I was able to look past it. I liked the new chapter, and am looking forward to new updates!
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Title: FIXED!
Reviewed By: Fireserpent14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2009 22:31 CDT
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Hey all! I'm the author! I wanted to tell everyone that chapter four is fixed! Sorry about that, ad please tell me if it happens again, because it isn't the first time!
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Reviewed By: MichiruAOZ [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2009 20:17 CDT
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Umm. Sry if it seems strange, but I had a major problems reading this chapter bc everything was "I" this and "I" that and I just couldn't follow it. It was difficult to keep straight who was being talked about when. Pls help. Thnks. Great story line though, I've kept up with it till this chappie.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2009 03:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*squeals* cant wait for the next bit!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2009 06:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice! i love it ^_____^
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Reviewed By: Rocky road On: July 22, 2009 01:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i like this story so far though i usually read X rated stories i can't wait for the next chapter so plz update soon
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Title: FIXED
Reviewed By: Fireserpent14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2009 19:40 CDT
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Hey Everyone, it's the author, I wanted to say that I fixed chapter 2! My computer does stupid thing like this all the time. On my other Fanfic, 'How Do You Learn To Love The Ones You Hate?', it switched Inuyasha's and Sango's names around. So sorry about that!
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