| "A Hanyou's Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2009 21:41 CDT
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Sorry been away wasn't able to review chapter three. Like before chapter three was another great piece. I think how you have Kagome remembering a little at a time is great. I like how you are changing out between the two on each chapter. Just one thing when you are describing Kagome try to keep the descriptions the same it makes it easy to follow. Chapter 4 another great addition 3 years have passed wow that's a long time. I think how you show his softer side was nice, because we all know he isn't a gruff punk all the time. Well keep up the great work and update soon.
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Reviewed By: arizonasiren1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2009 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh yea, Can't get enough. Looking forward to your next update.
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2009 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw, chapter three made me a little sad. I'm eager to see where your going with this, although I hope it's safe to say they'll be reunited, right?
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Reviewed By: arizonasiren1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2009 01:21 CDT
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Excellent story. I love your writing. Can't wait for next update.....
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Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2009 05:00 CDT
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Here you have another greatly written chapter. I do say he should suffer some more. I think you could go into a little more detail about how long it has been from his wish just to give us a reference. Well i cant wait and she how you do the next chapter keep up the great work. I keep reading as long as you keep writing.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2009 01:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
god i nearly wanted to fall to my knees aswell.... cant wait for chapter 2 ^__^ i know this is probly going to sound mean, but i want Inuyasha to suffer for that XD
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2009 23:22 CDT
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I really don't know what to say other then wow. Your writing is very dramatic but very good this story has great potential. Inn the little bit you have written you can feel so much from so little. I do home you keep writing because I think this story has a chance to be on of the greats. Update soon please. ~~~Mors'
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