| "Yugi's Little Secrets" Reviews/Comments [ 119 ] |
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Reviewed By: indianprincess On: October 20, 2004 07:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hiya! this is the second yugioh fic i've ever read and i like it! your style of writing is really easy to read and understand, and i compliment you for that. oh! another thing! that book that he was reading in chapter 1, was it "Magician" 'cos i think it was. I love that book. damn... wish i could write proper fanfiction like you do....
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Reviewed By: Rorayna On: May 03, 2004 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow different yugi,malik &ryou being half boy half girl scared me off at first but then i got addicted and kept reading. definitely keep writing ^_^ sincerely Rorayna (call me Rori)
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Reviewed By: -Lil Sorceress- On: April 06, 2004 10:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, You are good at this. Very nice fran fic....very long...took a week for me to finish it. Cute duel monster pairings. ^_^
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Title: COOL
Reviewed By: Harry Dick On: March 13, 2004 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay this was the best fan fic i ever wrote but the fact that yami is gay is kinda scary........but overall good work this is a great fan fic
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Reviewed By: technical dragon On: January 20, 2004 18:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool!!! Great story!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Peachs hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 12:42 CST
Comment/Review:
I like this fic.Unfortunately,I wonder why you made Yugi,Ryou,and Marik half boy half girl? But I'm not saying it as a bad thing .Another "favorite fic" to my list.
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Title: kibia
Reviewed By: shawna On: December 03, 2003 13:16 CST
Comment/Review:
dear kibia i love you very much i am your biggest fan i was wondering if u and yugi can come down to visit me and my friend i u want my address i will give it to u if you answer hear is my e-mail address GMe773@aol. com hope u write back sincerley your fan shawna
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Reviewed By: Mimiheart [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 15:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
I've read the first three chapters so far. It's very original. Just not really my cup of tea. I think you should have done some research on hermaphrodites before starting the story. Unless it's completely AU, hermaphrodites aren't really both sexes. They're neither. Of course, I probably watch too much Discovery Health Channel for my own good. Oh well. Good idea behind it...
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Reviewed By: Katmon/Junshin On: October 19, 2003 20:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ahhh!!! I totally forgot about this fic for so long!! Gomen!! *bows a thousand times in apology* But, I have found it again!! Yay!! Twas great, and I shall be keeping an eye out for the sequel!!! (As well as reading it!! *sweatdrop*) ~Katmon/Junshin/NoaGirl
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Reviewed By: Kurama no Miko2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 06:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this fic! I'll look for your sequel and read it too! If it's posted, that is . . . I like your take on the whole gender thing. It's cool. I like it. ~ Kurama no Miko2003
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Reviewed By: Hou-chan On: September 13, 2003 16:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAHOO!!!!! Now when will you finish the bloopers? |
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2003 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shadow: *screams in delight* You updated and it's finished!! *dances around the room idiotically* OH Zero you made me so happy!!! *glomps happily* Anzu is gone and tea is in a padded room. Okay that is so not the way I would have done it but yay!! Adnt hen I jsut loved hte couples they are sjut too cute for words!! Can't wait for your sequel I know it's gonna be jsut as good!! And Yugi as a kitty KAWAII!!!!!
Beloved: -.-; And this from drinking sour Kool-Aid.
Shadow: Dance wiht me!! ^^
Beloved: I don't dance.
Shadow: *drags her dark sister/yami into a conry dance*
Beloved: H-Hey let me go!! *but sighs and jsut hands on*
Shadow: Whee I'm so happy and i wanna draw!! Zero can I draw you something plz?!?!?! *bats big bambi eyes*
Beloved: *drags her sister/light and locks her in teh bathroom* Hey nice story, nice plot, nice ending. And she means it so if you would like to request anything go right ahead. We'll be waiting for that sequel *salutes* it's be a slice! See ya *walks off to put Shadow to bed for the night* |
Title: signed, your biggest fan......
Reviewed By: Pandapants182 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2003 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I've been a MAJOR fan from the beginning, adn I must say, I STILL LOVE THIS! ^____^ It's been a blast from the beginning! I hope it ends just a good as it came in! ((whew, over thirty chappies! That's a LOT! ^_^)) |
Reviewed By: the plagiarist On: August 21, 2003 13:38 CDT
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yo, hey there oxygene dude im sorry it was not my intention to use your name, just ran out of ideas and btw i like Jarre's music too |
Reviewed By: oxygene_iv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2003 20:26 CDT
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hey!!! someone used my name to rate this fic in a bad way!!!! what the hell he or she was thinking this is plagiarism!!!! if i know who did this i will for sure rip his balls or blow her bobs off!!! (goes for a the bank outfit at the malibu, grabs a machete and a phyton gun) muarhahaha!!! |
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