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| "Yugi's Little Secrets" Reviews/Comments [ 119 ] | | Pages (8): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 > » ] | Reviewed By: Akira On: July 29, 2003 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im really liking this fic!!! i wanna join the Anti-Tea club
*bashed Tea over head with spatula* am i in???
~Akira | Reviewed By: catbeastaisha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 23:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read all the other chapters up untill this one and really enjoyed reading it. I can't wait for you to continue it so I can see what happens next. ^_^ Keep up the good work!
-Aisha Clanclan of the Ctarl-ctarl Empire | Reviewed By: Houou Kazoku-Kaga On: July 20, 2003 17:36 CDT
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Sorry it's late but Mediaminer and my computer are asses. I am SOOO glad that you updated. Keep it up and here. for a birthday gift: A BELL PEPPER! Oh, and if you have any requests involving Iron Chef and Yu-Gi-Oh or whatever, ring up!
crestofnobility@yahoo.com
That's my email address. | Reviewed By: hi On: July 19, 2003 17:00 CDT
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how could you put yami and anzu toghether
shes a f******* b**** for hevens sake!!!! | Reviewed By: Oakland Peanuts [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yah! Gundamwingzero updated! Let's celebrate! Great Job! I want to see what happens to Yugi and Anzu/Tea, so you better update soon before I lose the last remaining piece of my sanity! Your Tea bashing is funny, especially the part of the "horrible sight". | Reviewed By: oxygene_iv On: July 10, 2003 08:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
i know, i ve rated this before... but after the third time i read it, something hit me, this is a yaoi fic in disguise, the fact that yugi is hermaprodithe (half boy, half girl as you said)is not a reason to make him a crossdresser!!! being hermaprodithe wont give you traits of the both sexes (yugi with female curves??? for god's sake)apart the fact that a hermaprodithe has both sexes (or more exactly organs) i suppose that if you were herm you will look either more like a guy that has a very sentimental attitude, or a tomboy girl. all in all i got this conclusion, if you say that your fic is not yaoi, fine. lots of people like it. but if you think about it yau can do two things, turn yugi in girl (that's right a girl not a herm) or admit that your fic a yaoi one... btw no offense was done | Reviewed By: Catsy & Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 00:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo, whats up? this is Catsy talkin to ya, and I wanted to know when your going to be finishing this little ficcie. I love the work that you have done and you should keep it up. and I got a couple of questions to ask you if you don't mind. 1.)Will Seto's love come in anytime soon, to be able to at least make Seto-chan smile? 2.) Will Anzu and her Hikari (i think, and am pretty sure who it is by now) be found out, and killed (just a suggestion) 3.)how in the world do you come up with idea's like these?????? 4.) will you ever finish this beautiful ficcie that you have woven? well those are all the questions I have for you. anyways, write more, and stop us from hanging on to the edge of this cliff here! you've got a great fic. going here!!! oh and I know how bad writers block can be, going through it right now at the moment, but can you please, please and I'm begging you, let this writers block clear up, so that we can find out what happens to our sweet Yugi and YGO Cast.well this is has been Catsy talking to you, Wingzero's number one fan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! | Reviewed By: Tenshi no Akuma On: June 27, 2003 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tenshi: I LOVE THIS FICCY!!!!! ^_____________^
Akuma: hikari no baka. anyways, despite my sugar-high hikari, i think this fic is a fun-to-read romance with plenty of humor, angst, and romance to read and reread over and over again.
Tenshi: my yami sounds like a critic....how disturbing...o_O
Akuma: urusai.
Tenshi: make me
Akuma: lets not start this again. *sigh* just get on with the reveiws.
Tenshi: as you wish, yami no baka. since i am still a little sugar high, i am virtually insane.
Akuma: it kinda showed when you used a big word...O.O
Tenshi: urusai.
Akuma: all i can say is that i hate Tea, and you can borrow my fire magic to torture her.
Tenshi: you can use my lighting magic if you want!
Akuma: all and all, your story is one of the best we have read in a long time and judging by how you write, your future in writing is very bright--
Tenshi: so bright in fact, that you blinded my dragon!
Akuma: -_-U riiiiiight. i just HAD to have an INSANE hikari. i could have a nice sane one now, but nooooooo. fate just HAD to givwe me this one! by Ra, i'm going insane myself...ahh...back to the point. onegai update soon because this is a very enjoyable fic, and i bet lots of reviewers would like you to continue quickly.
Tenshi: including me! ^_^
Akuma: riiiiight...update sooooon!!!
Tnehis: ONEGAI UPDATE! ONEGAAAAAAI????
Akuma: ja ne ^_~ | Reviewed By: Oakland Peanuts On: June 17, 2003 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Write more!!! Don't keep us in suspense, please!!! | Reviewed By: puzzle-chan On: June 14, 2003 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! you have a great story. the only things i didnt like were the yaoi (dont ask why, i've just never been a huge fan of it) and the fact that it just got TOO FRICKIN' LONG! i know there are plenty of ppl who like yaoi, and im fine with it, i think you just had a little too much.
oh, but i love the Tea bashing! miss squeaky voice who wont lay off the friendship speeches got what she deserved! i mean, we can already TELL that the series is about friendship, look at the characters names! 'Yu'gi, 'Jo'nouchi? yujo? i dont know if anyone else noticed this, but oh well | Reviewed By: Oakland Peanuts On: June 08, 2003 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love where this fic is going so far... when will there be more? | Reviewed By: ruby On: July 16, 2003 21:12 CDT
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awwwww! yugi a little kitty. come mere kitty, kiiiiiity. How cute. Um by the way, did you mean to say this is an angst fic not against sorry thought I'd point that out. I like this story, I like the way it has comedy and makes you laugh and makes you sad. I hope you continue to write. Oh and you know its ok for yugi to get hurt (hint). | Reviewed By: Lil Sex Kitten On: April 22, 2003 06:38 CDT
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FINISH PLZ. i have been waiting for you to finish the damn thing for like..... ever. Since ive been waiting i strated to create a finishing chapter..... i dont want to, i have to, to satisfy my needs of reading, finish the damn thing plz! | Reviewed By: oxygene_iv [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
a bit overrated, but is A good fanfic, above average i say,read it and if you like it, keep reading, great work Gundamwing!!!
now, if you excuse me, im going to say some words
(this goes for everyone) why yugiXyami (at least here in MM)is the most popular pairing!!! say, im a really open minded person, but really i think this pairing is a bit "disgusting",i DONT hate it, it just doesnt convince me, however i dont like to criticize others work, im just wondering why the pairing, to tell you the truth i think that if yugi had to choose between yami and say, Tea he would choose tea, there lots of girls in the series (and a lot more in the cards)other than Tea, maybe more YugiXSerenity or YugiXMay, however personally i think that one of the most mysterious girls (and the perfect one for Yugi)is Rebecca Hawkins, why? write me and we can discuss that later.(if you are interested in flaming me or just give your opinion mail me here,antonioosegueda@aol.com, mi big bro mail!!! you are an angel tony!!!)
kisses to everyone!!! | Reviewed By: Bakura On: March 11, 2003 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is very original. I don`t think I read someone with the same plot.
But I have some comment.
First, the correct term is not half-girl half-boy. The correct term is hermaprodite (forget the spelling). And i`m mot sure but the way you explained it don`t seem right. You better do some research. I may be wrong on the term, but it certainly not half-half.
Second, I really don`t think that the fact that Yugi have woman organ will make him fall in love with Yami. If he is in love, all his part (boy, and girl) are in love. Not half of them. Because that raise the question. Is there a half of him that don`t like Yami? I didn`t read all the story, but if you have anwered this question you can forget this point.
Third, I didnt see all of Yu-go-oh! but i am really certain that Yami had no physical body. I seem to recall that he his only a spirit and can only take Yugi form.
Fourth, the author at the beginning and at the end are a little bit long. They distract a little bit from the story.
Fifth, the character, unless you planned like this are a little bit OCC.
All and all it a really original fics, but i think that it need some work and some reseach.
I have rated 10 for Originality (very Original)
3 enjoyment factor because I didnt really like it. If it was yaoi It would have been alright. and I would have tolerated Het. But the mixed of gander just don`t cut it with me.
for the Overall Rating, I put 2 because of all the raison I have enumerated.
I didn`t rate you on the style of writing because i didn`t read all the chapter. Only the first two and your writing could have improvement.
I didn`t rate you on spelling and Grammar because I`m just not good enough in those area.
I hope you will correct the chapter and continue updating. | | Pages (8): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 > » ] |
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