| "Vegeta's Sucky Fanfic" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2010 20:30 CST
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Very funny :) I wondered if you would put any Yaoi in it and what Vegeta's reaction would be. Thrilled that Picollo wrote it too, can't wait to read what Vegeta does to Yamcha and if he finds out it was really Picollo.
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: catgirl26 (not signed in...again) On: November 19, 2009 20:17 CST
Comment/Review:
Vegeta's description of breasts (like bags of sand) is made of win. I also like the fact that Piccolo left the review, and that he did some ninja moves and had some scotch afterward; nice use of an obvious OOC moment to make fun of ooc-ness.
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: catgirl26 (not signed in) On: November 19, 2009 20:14 CST
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The last line really makes this work. My only issue is that Bulma actually gives good advice (Have a catchy title and summary)! lol. I also like the comment about "enormous cerulean orbs". Really. Orbs? That one drives me a little nuts.
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Reviewed By: Xaverri On: August 11, 2009 03:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha this is getting better and better! I can't believe how much I had to hold in my laughing at work here, or they would all have looked at me very funnily ^.^ Your humor is the best, I love Rakarot haha, I had tears streaming down my eyes while holding a hand over my mouth to stop myself laughing! Keep it up, more more!
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Reviewed By: Xaverri On: August 06, 2009 10:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bulma wasn't crying this story, so I'll do it for her.... Crying of laughter! So recognisable! Even though the really good writers out there tend to use these clichés, atleast they bring a certain style and finesse to it :) So, to be a good writer...be unique! This was unique :D
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Title: utsukushi
Reviewed By: utsukushi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2009 07:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! I love satire. At first i was like, "This is totally OOC." Then I got the point. I wonder how many folks will actually "get" this or see themselves in her descriptions. Thanks for making me laugh.
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